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Post by Batman »

i found this on one of my notepads..cant remember when i wrote this but its at least 1-2 months old

gimme feedback please

my time was wasted on dreamin bout car chases
slippin from hard cases but now they all faded
had to learn words of knowledge the hard way
from playin with pokemon to actin like scarface
nothings like it used to be its hard to write
cuz i aint got shit to do and i starve at nights
im delirious like havin sex for the first time
my chance was too hot, so fuck it i burned mine
prayin to be forgiven just to get back to sinnin
tryinna catch my soul but it like soap in prison
my souls imprisoned inside a chamber of confusion
see visions of better days but its just illusions
earned my place in prison...
exhibit my thoughts cuz if you givin then your gettin
im sick of givin cuz nobodys givin me back
i die every night but god keeps bringin me back










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Post by B-Bear »

yeah.. def nice drop.. pretty much agree wit TOYH..

really enjoyed this part

prayin to be forgiven just to get back to sinnin
tryinna catch my soul but it like soap in prison
my souls imprisoned inside a chamber of confusion
see visions of better days but its just illusions
earned my place in prison..
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