Suicide Or Homicide?

*.HarleQuin.* · Post by ***.HarleQuin.*** » Mon Feb 26, 2007 3:57 pm

mac!!, u cant kill her!! NOOO
i like this even tho it
SCARED me!! hehe
flowed quite nicely..= )

MesaR · Post by **MesaR** » Mon Feb 26, 2007 3:58 pm

lol yeah man it was pritty funny.

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Mon Feb 26, 2007 4:56 pm

cooool

Word. I've actually done this topic before.

It could be argued that you did it a little better.

I thought this was pretty creative. The rhyme scheme
was a little off.

Not much for a conclusion. The overall direction wasn't that
great.

I still felt the concept & the flow though. Despite the rhyme scheme
losing itself sometimes.

~*Blitz*~ · Post by **~*Blitz*~** » Mon Feb 26, 2007 4:58 pm

wow, alot of anger! lol....nice drop that shit was insane but good, it went together nicely and didnt fall off once...good shit!

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Mon Feb 26, 2007 5:01 pm

Or maybe you being a good enough author to get the point across. I was lost at the end?

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