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RH1NO · Post by **RH1NO** » Mon Mar 05, 2007 5:21 am

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RH1NO · Post by **RH1NO** » Mon Mar 05, 2007 5:23 am

http://illestlyrics.com/board/what-u-ca ... t3830.html

SlickMex · Post by **SlickMex** » Mon Mar 05, 2007 7:20 am

i thought it was ok..when ur write can u make it..

blah blah blah etc etc//
blah blah blah etc etc// it's easier to read..

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Mon Mar 05, 2007 7:25 am

exactly this was okay but it drug on too much

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Mon Mar 05, 2007 8:29 am

Guy when are you gonna finally fix your structure, how many times, do multiple ppl have to tell you that it sux readin verses that are writtin like that.

~*Blitz*~ · Post by **~*Blitz*~** » Mon Mar 05, 2007 10:10 am

nice drop, I got bored with it and yes it was very hard to keep up with cause of the structure but props on the effort...there was some decent shit in it

and on another note Im proud of him for not using caps!! Someone give him some props for that!!

RH1NO · Post by **RH1NO** » Mon Mar 05, 2007 1:32 pm

edited structure tryin to get this

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