no name

[overkill]

I tried to deny my true intuition//
like a trained navy seal aborting the mission//

and when people start askin me to express my voice//
i reach for my pen, my weapon of choice//

i tried to tell myself that i aint no good//
that ill never make it, since i aint from the hood//

and that nobody carez about lil white cappz//
about suicide death and handicap facts// (refers to loss of my friends)

well the traps have been laid//
and the stage has been made//

and ive yet to be paid//
but i wont let it phase//

cuz all i want is my voice to be heard through the noise//
spread the word to your boys time to stop with the toys//

and grow up to be men, and ill say it again//
grab your pen and defend cuz were under attack.

[Viral]

not bad...i can see u still got ur skillz goin u jst gotta open em back up...the cyphers r by far the best uve posted on here...i dnt see y u dont post some good writtens like dat...oh well...keep it up man...peeace

[overkill]

Thanks, it always been hit or miss, pending on frestyle and cypher.

[Ambiguous Realm]

yea wat viral said.. ur other written was good.. lil short but good.. this one wasn't too bad but seemed kinda basic and some rhymes were a lil off too