freestyle flow

overkill · Post by **overkill** » Mon Jan 30, 2006 5:26 pm

Comin' out the 'birth canal as words' you wouldn't be born-as-lyrical//
This 'Man' must hire a 'Lyricist' to perform-his-'miracles'//

'Spur' of the moment rhyming, I'll put ya lines-in-'sports'//
'Abreviate ya words,' the skill in ya rhymes-is-'short'//

'Ring around your rhymes,' I'll 'plunger'-with-force//
Never 'penetratin'' rhymes, you'll always just have a 'Hunger-for-Force'//

'Whip' you with lyrics, keep it wild-and-gold//
Even ya name implies that ya style-is-'cold'//

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Tue Jan 31, 2006 6:51 am

this was dope, nice wordplay man. 8/10

Ambiguous Realm · Post by **Ambiguous Realm** » Tue Jan 31, 2006 9:50 am

pretty decent piece.. better than the shyt u did for the battle u had with micz...7/10

overkill · Post by **overkill** » Tue Jan 31, 2006 10:06 am

EkomS wrote:pretty decent piece.. better than the shyt u did for the battle u had with micz...7/10

As I told complex, it only took 6 hrs.
That's wacked, it took my wife less time to have my first son.

Ambiguous Realm · Post by **Ambiguous Realm** » Tue Jan 31, 2006 10:09 am

6 hrs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!holy shit.. ur joking lmao

overkill · Post by **overkill** » Tue Jan 31, 2006 10:12 am

EkomS wrote:6 hrs!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!holy shit.. ur joking lmao

In my house there is 6 total. My wife and kids plus my inlaws live with us. Its rush hour 24-7.

Ambiguous Realm · Post by **Ambiguous Realm** » Tue Jan 31, 2006 10:16 am

so then y did it take so long?

really lol.. it only takes a couple of mins to drop

overkill · Post by **overkill** » Tue Jan 31, 2006 10:51 am

Technically......probably not, mybe 3 hrs.....lol

drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Tue Jan 31, 2006 11:01 am

foreal

anything you see me post on here takes me less than a whole beat to play thru twice, and thats like 8 minutes max

anyway this was alright multis were strait, now you just need to work on similies, metaphors, & rhyme scheme

overkill · Post by **overkill** » Tue Jan 31, 2006 11:27 am

all killah wrote:foreal
now you just need to work on similies, metaphors, & rhyme scheme

Man, now ur tell'in me to go back to school, they did'nt have half that shit in tha stone age.

drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Tue Jan 31, 2006 11:31 am

go tell that to kool g rap, rakim, & big daddy kane

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Tue Jan 31, 2006 11:39 am

hahah ^

overkill · Post by **overkill** » Tue Jan 31, 2006 11:47 am

all killah wrote:go tell that to kool g rap, rakim, & big daddy kane

LMAO......

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