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.:Fade:. · Post by **.:Fade:.** » Wed Feb 01, 2006 12:35 am

As I reach toward -Perfection- i make my own -Correction- //
Otha rapers get mad wen they -Check Em- my lines drop u, u best not -Test Em- //
Hate wen people say their the best at rap, shit raps wat i -Best In-// (think about it)
U beta -Invest In- somthin asa form of -Protection- somthin lika -Vest'N- //
A skellkey for wen police try to -Arrest Em-, now i go ya -Guessin- //
YES my rhymes jus turned into a -Blessin-, teachin u a -Lession- //

Tired of these NON rappas -Bitchin- jus wait, soon ill be -Dissin- //
U wonder wats my -Mission- shit my gun is wat i really be -Clinchin- //
And i get to writin an make people -Flinchin- //
Now i got yall to -Listen- an i got ya people Wishin- //
I never came by an took ya fuckin daddys -Pentchion- //

Im greddy lik the -Grinch'n- tha Scruge givin u bad news start -Switchin- //
Ur head is wat im lenchin, den im leavin ur body on the gound twitchin //
Ur broke ass in the streets -Hitchin-, fora ride theres no pride did i -Mention-? //
Man ur paper is wat u should be -Fixin-, an stop -Mixen- other peoples lines wit ur rhymes in ur -Kitchin- //

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Wed Feb 01, 2006 1:58 am

this was straight, the multi's were on point, though the scheme was pretty basic, the content was pretty good. I'll give it an 8 out of 10, it was straight

Ambiguous Realm · Post by **Ambiguous Realm** » Wed Feb 01, 2006 2:50 pm

wat complex said...i liked part of one of ur drops in the cypher..but to be honest u need to work on ur rhymes and punchlines..i'd give this piece a 6/10

drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Wed Feb 01, 2006 2:55 pm

this lacked any real form of rhythm

you need to work on wording shit too, some of its worded awkwardly

running a spell checker on it may do you some good too

and what multis tom? lol

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Wed Feb 01, 2006 2:57 pm

want me to call them, just simple inners? or multi's

drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Wed Feb 01, 2006 3:00 pm

multis are 3 syllables or more, not one or two syllable rhymes repeated in a bar

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Wed Feb 01, 2006 3:08 pm

doesn't matter if there repeated. I'm pretty sure some of them would count as multi's. I'm not going to debate any further though. Because I don't like being wrong

Ambiguous Realm · Post by **Ambiguous Realm** » Thu Feb 02, 2006 9:51 am

the multis tom is talking about is the kind most forum users or online textcees wouldn't call multis...

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Thu Feb 02, 2006 9:55 am

thank you mexico

Ambiguous Realm · Post by **Ambiguous Realm** » Thu Feb 02, 2006 10:01 am

your welcome USA

Guest · Post by **Guest** » Fri Feb 03, 2006 3:34 pm

nice shit i love the multies it was a little basic though but nice shit i liked it keep it up

drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Sat Feb 04, 2006 7:17 am

well "multis" is an internet term so you won't find anybody strictly offline using it

its derived from "multi-syllable" which you may hear offline cats using

Guest · Post by **Guest** » Mon Feb 06, 2006 9:28 am

lol, im pretty sure everyone knows its multie syllable thats straight forward. and for this piece, it sounds kinda basic, sure you have alot of rhymes in it, but alot of them were obvious rhymes, like i could just read the first bar and know all the words you were gonna use. thats my only beef, keep droppin man it was still decent

Ambiguous Realm · Post by **Ambiguous Realm** » Tue Feb 07, 2006 5:20 am

i know that's wat it is although i never judge it that way on text... usually multiple rhymes one after another constantly is wat i consider multis.. using more syllables i dont usually judge on but i never call it multis(even tho that's wat it is lol)i call mines rhyme-combinations...lol(no really i do lol)

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