False immortality

[Momeijah]

This is Something i Wrote in a Hurrrrrry. im Playing Around With Different Styles at The Mo... Buuut This One is Just a 'Summary' Of a Piece im Going To Be Doing Like.. Whenever Lol. it's Basically What The Name is. About How u Bully Ppl into Worshipping u Even When They Dont Think The Same in Their Head. Basically Just To Feel Better About Yourself. BASICALLY Bullying Lol. But it Means More lol. This One is Just a Quick One About What Goes On in a Bully's Head lol. ill Get More Clear On The Next One.

Ever Had The Feelin You've Become One-Of-ur-Problems ..||
Worthless, Begin To See-Yourself as Scum-at-The-Bottom ..||
Turn-Sour, Cuz u Got No Blunt-Power, Stuck-in-a-Rotten ..||
Pit Of Self Hate, Where All u Believe is Negative, Luck-And-No-God-But, ..||
u Find an Outlet, Between-Hate, And Duckin-The-Bombings ..||
u Think ur Wiping a Clean-Slate, But ur Just Fuckin-With-Progress ..||
u Cant Lick ur Wounds, Now it's About Making-Them-Pay ..||
Fear And Hate For Yourself Has Anger Taking-it's-Place ..||
Anger Turns into Feeling Owed, And u Believe-ur-The-Best ..||
And Asking For Worship, Just For Relieving-The-Stress ..||
Some Fall For it, Some Think ur Just Nothing-But-Fallen ..||
And ur Victims Give u 'False immortality', Struck-With-a-Rocket ..||
Like a Drug ur Never Needin-Help And Nothin-Can-Stop-Him ..||
ur at The Top Of The World, Most Know ur Nothing-But-Common ..||
Soon it Dawns, They Only Called u 'Great' So You-Could-Be-Happy ..||
Nothin But a Charity Case, And While ur Usually-Laughing ..||
u Fall Back into a Slump, u Realised All This Greatness-Was-False ..||
ur Nothing, u Could Only See ur Aura, it's Fake-And-it's-Wrong ..||
Right Back Where u Started, Now u Feel Stupid-u-Tried ..||
Fell From The Clouds And Awoken To a Spooky-Surprise ..||


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[RH1NO]

did someone take ya lunch money? lol
dope drop i see what ya mean about makin it more clear
alot of potential on the topic but im sure in what ive seen from you itll be crystal.. nice

[Momeijah]

Nah i Used To Be a Bully Moowahahaha, Then u Just Grow Up And Realise That ur 'Aura' Fades. Hance The Name Lol. Thanks For The Feed.

[~*Blitz*~]

the ending was nice, very sketchy and jumped around a bit...but a nice piece. Never knew what went on in a mean persons head so ty for letting me know lol. you fucken assholes! Anyway nice drop domino, looking forward to one you put more effort into on this subject

[SlickMex]

Yea it was a good drop..but on some of the lines i got lost in the rhyme..must be the way i read it cuz lines didnt even rhyme to me.But it was still a good drop..Work need on it tho..

[LadySam]

yea i agree i got lost in some lines, but i like the topic. doing greatttt mr domino, keep dropping wanker aka fuckwit aka loser
hahaha <3

[B-Bear]

pretty much agree with the rest who has left feedback, nice idea, but a lil bit choppy.. some words didn't rhyme and some were off point.. but i understand what u want with the piece.. like blitzy said, sit down and put some more effort in it and u'll have one hell of a piece man! keep it up!

[Momeijah]

Well i Mean i Liked it..............

Lol it's Just About Looking For Confidence in Other Ppl, By Kicking Their Ass And Making Them Respect u.

[Dead Silence]

THATS how u gotta get sum shit done lol