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I Gotta Be Craazy

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I'm declarin war on greed cause it feed the disloyalty
u're all droppin inmaterial speeches like a royalty
my lil finger can handle the invasion of this nation
it's spiritless and i come with hip hop to this premesis
their genesis needs to rediscover the inner lyricist
boundries are limitless like we take it to a new level
organize a rebel like young students and demonstrate
to eliminate the radio rappers like suicide bombers
it'll leave u somber like speeches in a funeral session
pour out my agression with absolutely no disrection
didn't study a second, but calling myself a lyricist
write rhymes that change laws of gravity like a psysicist
don't ask for clearences like Sokrates and his prophecies
reinvent democracies that creates a new hip hop empire
leaving u energized like lookin at a pimped out preacher
the features will be breathtakin like a naked teacher
eat some duracells and u'd get energy to follow me
I can swallow three major emcees like one big bite
leave u with a recite and lyrics like I expect some tip
one slip and i'll be comin for u hungrier then paparazzi
roll my dices and i'll score yatzy like I'm a phsycic
it's all vividly like i'm raising my own statue of liberty
trigger me and i'll tear up scenes like old Hiroshima
devastating effect on materials and faces like Katrina
it'll be like a world war 3, but i control the playstation
gettin impatient, cause I'm dyin to whipe out this nation

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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

some of this didnt make sense at all, but then on the other hand some of it was dope as hell, some pretty kool wordplayin and imagry in it as well. but it was almost like repetitive at some points of the verse, i struggled to get through the last half of the verse. so in an over view of it id give it a 6.5/10
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by B-Bear »

aiit.. thanks for takin time.. really what i'm tryin to do is experiment a lil bit now.. so the verse may seem confusing to ya'll.. but thanks again for feed.. uppin..
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