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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

a old track...
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

this was ALOT better than wat i expected.. out of all 3 this was the best as well.. the flow wasn't too bad delivery was there.. multis as usual.. didn't mind listening to this one at all..good shit
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thanx homie appreciate the feed, uppin for some more
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

it wasnt bad...this was the best id say as well...better then the rest..keep practicin n shit man..-1-
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thanx for leavin some feed
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Post by 16 Micz »

pretty dope track, lawgix had an ill verse, the beat was ok...the delivery andflow was there too pretty nice keep it up...

i liked ur first verse better ghost, kind of reminded me of a kool g rap, type of flow, idk maybe its just me..but nice keep it up as well..
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thanx man, i appreciate the feed,,, for reel. and soundin like kool g rap is a compliment to me even though im white...lol but hes tight as fuck

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Post by SlickMex »

I tried down loading it..but it wouldnt pop up n play..Ill be happyto take a listen..Get At Me On Msn.. [email protected]
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Post by drunken jesus »

flow is there, i don't really like your voice or delivery, your breath control needs some work you run out of breath and mumble your words a lil bit a few times

didn't like lawgix part, with that lower voice tone style he sounded like ken kaniff

i think 16 meant with the flow, cause you don't sound like kool g voice or delivery-wise lol, but with repeat multis you were spitting it kinda sounded like a g rap type flow
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by 16 Micz »

yea the flow, lol not the lyrics, lol your lyrics were good too...but i was talkin bout ur flow when i said kool g
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Post by Viral »

ur homie G-A-O-S-T!??!?...lol coulda swore it was a H...hahaa...ne ways...

the flow on this was a bit choppy..it was here n there for me..beat was tight...i used that beat awhile back...for feel the force....ive heard this track before....awhile ago also....before it was posted on here im almost 100% sure..lol....i remember that breath part....n lawgix does got that ken kaniff type of voice DJ was talkin bout....lol....cept its not as perverted sounding...hahahaha..the third verse sounded like a major loss of breathe....i could hear it in ya voice...like u were stressin to get the end of those bars out..but over all...this was a decent audio.....definatley wanna hear something new...keep it up
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

thanx for all the feed guys, its appreciated and yeah i do tend to run outta breathe a lot...

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Post by Viral »

~Symbolikull~ wrote:thanx for all the feed guys, its appreciated and yeah i do tend to run outta breathe a lot...

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MEEE TOO!!..lol NO EXCUSES!!...lol
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

so how do you control you breathe then, cuz i know you spit your flow fulla multies jus as well as me. do you have any ideas or suggestions for me to use that may help me?
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Post by ~*Blitz*~ »

I think this is my fav track from Phill and my fav from ghost too, you guys did a good job...you should post more of your audios
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