Beast Vs Gutta (gutta)

[Beast]

House Rules
One Round 6-8 bars
3 votes=K.O Or First To 5 votes=*Winner*

I'll drop first....

[Gutta]

aight drop it

[Beast]

You fuckin with the wrong emcee, who nicer since me?..//
My lines paint pictures sharper than Da Vinci's..//

You not a rapper just rhyming talker, marathon walker..//
Runnin with a sprinter, not conditioned, got nothing to offer..//

The Real champ is me, whether its people's or Lyrically..//
So Next Time, Like "Hairlines", I suggest you "Recede"..//

Whether written forcefully or relaxed, ya shitty raps..//
Are just a fraction of my skill, like they was income tax..//

I got that feel like novacaine's in ya brain flow..//
Insane-though, I'll do you dirtier than cocaine-dough..//

If your verse is half as good as what I'm Bout to say..//
Then your Brain got twice as lucky to get those words arranged..//

Skeleton showin, Gutta exposed, you never rose past me..//
I Blast heat and break this rapper like rhinoplastys..//

[Gutta]

Beast, I can take ya out ya misery and put ya in a social study book like u was history//
Rip through ya best verse with no sympathy, ya greatest hits soundin like mixtape shit to me//

I leave bitches with they pussy wet, Gutta get alot of dome, look//
The only girl that eva said ya name iz one of da million bitches in my fone book//

I spit one line and watch u crumble like da towers, on the streets I be smokin 4 hours//
you tha bitch that said he had enuff of jail, bein that first one dat drop da soap in the showers//

Listen when I rhyme I'm like the difference between the murder rate and the crime//
Beast come with lots of hate in his rhymes, SO I'mma crack his vertabrate from his spine//

Listen I'm trouble, I hustle, then relax and sit back to watch dem pies bubble//
I keep a nine for my enemies, look G, you couldnt even pretend ta be a beast in my Jungle//

Yo I stay so hot on da block, but dats prolly cuz i roll wit heaters//
Motherfuck Da Vinci, my rhymes paint pictures like Mona Lisa's//

My rhymes so insane, that when i spit em they eat thru ya brain//
I suggest you recede in dis game, and change ya name, this Beast needs ta be tamed//

Yo the shit that i spit on tracks, help me pay my income tax, so watch wat ya sayin out ya mouth//
After a long bid, I'll be chillen in ya moms crib, already layed out da down payment on da house//

[-SoahKGniK-]

Punches-Beast
Flow=BEAST
Personals=GUTTA

[Gutta]

^^^^^ u even read my verse???

[Cee4]

Close
Punches-Gutta
Personals-Gutta
Flow-Beast

Vote-Gutta

Gutta- You kept flippin Beast`s lines and words. He talks about recede and income tax, then u talk about the same. Im new to this site but is that not against the rules. It means whoever goes second is gettin an unfair advantage. You did that when u battled me too. Still think you did enough to take it tho

[134282]

First off, I would just like to note that the Mona Lisa was painted by Da Vinci. So that line seemed completely senseless to me.

This was a close one.

Beast's flow was choppy and his hits weren't very hard; at least, not as hard as Gutta's. The rhyme scheme side of this battle definitely goes to Gutta. His composition was (mostly) relaxed and multi-syllable rhymes flowed very smoothly. I like the way Gutta took some of Beast's material and turned it against him; but I suppose that's the shitty part about going first.


Gutta, when you battle, you should refrain from talking about things like hustling and watching your pies bubble - it has nothing to do with the battle. It makes you seem like you can't stay on topic or you're just desperate for filler. Lastly, lines like this: "I leave bitches with they pussy wet, Gutta get alot of dome, look//
The only girl that eva said ya name iz one of da million bitches in my fone book//" are just plain wack. You wrote ", look" after dome, just so you could force the "fone[sic] book" rhyme - and it was wack. Why are girls in YOUR phone book calling out HIS name...? You just dissed yourself. Just my personal opinion.

Vote: Gutta.

[Gutta]

^^^^ ya i undastand wat u guys r sayin some times i just write shit to fill up da lines but i still make it rhyme. I did not kno u couldnt flip but i do now and wont do it again. That line with the dome, look. why you thought it was whack? i was sayin i fuck bitches dawg, i get alot of head (dome) now look boi u ugly and the only girl u eva talked 2 is just one of the bitches in my fone book. i was tryin ta say hes not a pimp to simplify it.

[134282]

^^^^ ya i undastand wat u guys r sayin some times i just write shit to fill up da lines but i still make it rhyme. I did not kno u couldnt flip but i do now and wont do it again. That line with the dome, look. why you thought it was whack? i was sayin i fuck bitches dawg, i get alot of head (dome) now look boi u ugly and the only girl u eva talked 2 is just one of the bitches in my fone book. i was tryin ta say hes not a pimp to simplify it.

Yeah, but when your rhymes need to be explained, they're not good. And I understood the "dome" part, but you forced the rhyme of that bar by adding the word "look", just to top it off with some wackness in the next line.

[Gutta]

ight, ight than for tha feed tho mang

[*.HarleQuin.*]

punches:beast
personals:gutta
flow:beast
creativity: neither
multies: meh..beast

both of u guys concepts were played as fuck.
like...

gutta:
I spit one line and watch u crumble like da towers, on the streets I be smokin 4 hours//
you tha bitch that said he had enuff of jail, bein that first one dat drop da soap in the showers//<<twin towers VERY played out as well as the soap in showers and ur opponent being gay

beast:
I got that feel like novacaine's in ya brain flow..//
Insane-though, I'll do you dirtier than cocaine-dough..// <<drug concept ..played

try to find more things to compare to when usin punches; drugs, 'homos', and guns aren't the only things

very close but..
vote: BEAST
2-2 uppin

[Gutta]

yo ill admit i didnt hit hard with tha flow, but i came strong with the punches and i think i had a lot of multies??? but yo i didnt come hard in this battle so ill be lucky to win.

[Lawgix]

punches - beast
flow - beast
personals - i'm leanin more toward gutta
creativity - i saw alot in beast's verse gutta ur shit just drug on man... keep it short n sweet
multies - i will agree with harlequin, tho i didn't see too many i'll go with beast

beast - your verse was fire!! honestly that shit killed gutta imo

my fav lines were

The Real champ is me, whether its people's or Lyrically..//
So Next Time, Like "Hairlines", I suggest you "Recede"..//

Whether written forcefully or relaxed, ya shitty raps..//
Are just a fraction of my skill, like they was income tax..//
^^ i thought that went really good man nice job

gutta - your verse seemed forced... like u were tryin so hard to accomplish dissin him and u had some nice punches but i think beast got the better of you

the verse i did like -

Listen when I rhyme I'm like the difference between the murder rate and the crime//
Beast come with lots of hate in his rhymes, SO I'mma crack his vertabrate from his spine// << that was good

BUT gun talk don't win battles... ESPECIALLY on IL... alot of new-comers do that and its whack... drop the gun talk inna battle... cause gun talk can be used as personals if u use them often which i saw u did... so thats my advice

but my vote goes to beast

3-2 beast uppin lets keep this goin

[Gutta]

ya this battle dont mean nuthin 2 me i wrote in a sec so ya thanx for da feed i guess i still thought he didnt come harda than me but whateva u guys decide