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Listen To "No Lie" By Big P!
Last edited by BigP on Tue Jun 12, 2007 6:04 am, edited 1 time in total.
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ARE YOU DEAF BIG P?? Like Can You Not Hear yourself, Your Way Off Beat, Your Mumbling And NOt Making Sense, It Sounds Like A Deaf Kid Taught You How To Speak, Seriously Man, I Dont Think Its Any Better Then Your Other Shit, You Have To Learn How To Fucking Speak Before You Can Even Think About Rapping, That Was Horrible, Dont Keep It Up.. Your To Fuckin Fake Anyways, Go Become An Actor Or Something, Maybe They Will Let You Be A Tree Or SOmehting In A Movie..
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Damn. Well...lets start off. Again...ur brain and mouth have yet another inner battle and continue to not allow you to ride a beat! The hook was semi-better from a written standpoint. It was real basic...which is better than the hooks in ur previous songs...but still needs inprovement. Diverse is right though...you do mumble ur way through the song. You need to speak up! What I tell you before bro!? I said spit the shit like you mean it! You have to feel what ur sayin...put emotion behind the words...emphesize the lyrics you use. Rap it like you believe every word that comes outta ur mouth! I can't stress to you enough how vitally important to a song that is! If you mumble it...it's gonna sound like hot-dog-shit everytime! You need to act out what you do. If you do that...you solved half ur problem. I'm not sure what to tell you to help you know how to ride a beat. That's just sumthin you should normally be able to do. Like it just has to do with you have good rythym...but I dunno. Practice makes purpose I guess.
How doesnt it make any sence?Diverse wrote:ARE YOU DEAF BIG P?? Like Can You Not Hear yourself, Your Way Off Beat, Your Mumbling And NOt Making Sense, It Sounds Like A Deaf Kid Taught You How To Speak, Seriously Man, I Dont Think Its Any Better Then Your Other Shit, You Have To Learn How To Fucking Speak Before You Can Even Think About Rapping, That Was Horrible, Dont Keep It Up.. Your To Fuckin Fake Anyways, Go Become An Actor Or Something, Maybe They Will Let You Be A Tree Or SOmehting In A Movie..
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Once again, thanks for the advice. i honistly think its my mic, because i rap loud, but when i listen to it on my computer and its really really low! I tryed everthing, and thats the loudest I can get it! I dont know why! Anyone have any ideas?!?!? If so please help me out, thanks!Kurse wrote:Damn. Well...lets start off. Again...ur brain and mouth have yet another inner battle and continue to not allow you to ride a beat! The hook was semi-better from a written standpoint. It was real basic...which is better than the hooks in ur previous songs...but still needs inprovement. Diverse is right though...you do mumble ur way through the song. You need to speak up! What I tell you before bro!? I said spit the shit like you mean it! You have to feel what ur sayin...put emotion behind the words...emphesize the lyrics you use. Rap it like you believe every word that comes outta ur mouth! I can't stress to you enough how vitally important to a song that is! If you mumble it...it's gonna sound like hot-dog-shit everytime! You need to act out what you do. If you do that...you solved half ur problem. I'm not sure what to tell you to help you know how to ride a beat. That's just sumthin you should normally be able to do. Like it just has to do with you have good rythym...but I dunno. Practice makes purpose I guess.
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What The Fuck Man..
Half The Dawgs On illestLyrics.com That Say I Cant Rhyme-For-Shit//
They Most Likely Suck Too, Did They Ever Tryna Make-A-Hit?//
How Is That A Multi, When Rhyme, And Make Dont even rhyme?
Ever since ya had beef wit me, ya breath stinks, hes a Tick-Tac//
Cant Shut Your Mouth Man, Ya Gotta Chit-Chat//
How can he be a tic tack When His breath smells? doesnt that prevent it..
Naw I dont rape lil' boys, like MJ//
Call ya boy Up, 717-977-3004//
Ok Then?
Bye.
Half The Dawgs On illestLyrics.com That Say I Cant Rhyme-For-Shit//
They Most Likely Suck Too, Did They Ever Tryna Make-A-Hit?//
How Is That A Multi, When Rhyme, And Make Dont even rhyme?
Ever since ya had beef wit me, ya breath stinks, hes a Tick-Tac//
Cant Shut Your Mouth Man, Ya Gotta Chit-Chat//
How can he be a tic tack When His breath smells? doesnt that prevent it..
Naw I dont rape lil' boys, like MJ//
Call ya boy Up, 717-977-3004//
Ok Then?
Bye.


..Fuck that gay shit you say on a beat..
What The Fuck Man..
Your right, I really dont have an answer for that.SequencE wrote:Half The Dawgs On illestLyrics.com That Say I Cant Rhyme-For-Shit//
They Most Likely Suck Too, Did They Ever Tryna Make-A-Hit?//
How Is That A Multi, When Rhyme, And Make Dont even rhyme?
I typed it wrong its not supossed to be 'hes a tic-tac' it supossed to be 'heas a tic-tac.SequencE wrote:Ever since ya had beef wit me, ya breath stinks, hes a Tick-Tac//
Cant Shut Your Mouth Man, Ya Gotta Chit-Chat//
How can he be a tic tack When His breath smells? doesnt that prevent it..
whats wrong with this, its not suposed to rhyme..SequencE wrote:Naw I dont rape lil' boys, like MJ//
Call ya boy Up, 717-977-3004//
Ok Then?
Bye.SequencE wrote:Bye.
Last edited by BigP on Tue Jun 12, 2007 11:00 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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because everone thinks I suck, and wants to rub it in my face..all disrespect fot the most part.. but hey thanks for the positive feedback!ThaOneYouHate wrote:Lol... Wasnt tha greatest but it was better then ya previous trackz... and how tha fuck does this kid get feed and 22 pagez of discussion when i get feed from 2 people max? Lmaoo
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