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Just A Random Diss

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it-s-me-today-its-the-day-i-ve-been-rap ... t5554.html

Just Mucking Around

My Shits " Fire " so When You Read My Raps Im "burning-Ya-Eyes"...
You Couldnt " FLIP " My Shit Working At Macs Flippin Burgers-n--Fries..

Your Spits Are Lose, And You Know That My Shit-Is-Tight..
If Your Gonna Rap, Dont Talk About Crap. Just Spit-It-Right..

Im Shitting all Over This You , Maybe You Should Quit N Stop-It..
How Can You Have Money In Tha Bank? with nothing in Ur Wallet..

When Yall Spit It Seems You Dont Even Deserve A Rank..
You Couldnt " Cheque In " Waiting In The Line At A Bank..

I spit Nouns And Excellent-Verbs Witch Form N Create Elaganet-Terms..
Your Shit Isnt Relavant-Nerd. I Spit Pure Skill, And Inteligent-Words..

Just Mucking Around Upping Feed!..
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Post by Gutta »

not bad man i think i'd give it like a 6/10
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Post by SlickMex »

Nice drop..had some good and funny stuff on it
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Post by B-Bear »

u started off good lil man.. prolly the best line.. then u had some straight punches, not eye-catching.. but funny..

keep it up.. lookin forward to seein more from u.. be patient man, that's vital to ya elevation...
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Post by T-Stylez »

It was all good but i dont think burnign and burgers rhyme lol.
Keep it up was fun 2 read =D
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Post by Gutta »

My Shits " Fire " so When You Read My Raps Im "burning-Ya-Eyes"...
You Couldnt " FLIP " My Shit Working At Macs Flippin Burgers-n--Fries..

i liked that bar the best
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Post by Dead Silence »

6/10

i thought it was alright not straight fire but alright
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Post by MesaR »

lol yeah nothing special. i was just muckin around keepin what ever came to my head, thanks.
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