Two IN One!!!!!!

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Thu Jun 28, 2007 3:58 am

Hip-Hops the Pace Maker, to my heart that beats to never Waste Paper,
I spit vapors like a Paint Sprayer, flammable fluids to get yuh Face Flamed Up,//

I don't Credit Stupid, my words our absurd how they land hits like Lennox Lewis,
If I write it, Bet Its Music, I pulled the plug on yuh tape, hit Eject and Threw It,//

My â€œenvironmentsâ€

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Thu Jun 28, 2007 4:03 am

Im fulla Venom and the Rage
When I release my Pen Up on this Page,
I Never Winnin any Day,
So my Adrenaline is Caged,
No Medicine is Gave,
so your Sentenced to this Pain,
Im Relentless wit my Aim,
And Endless wit the Range,
Usin my Penmanship to Fame,
Getting Set Up In the Game,
Old Skool Classics be Steppin on yuh Name,
No Bangin! Im Never Reppin for a Gang,
I aint letting up keep Checkin for you Chain,
Its Settin in yuh Veins,
A reminiscence of that Infection in my Brain,
Called brilliance, Im Better when Im Vague,
From the Chedda to the Change,
So Remember that Im Praised,
Never needin a Baretta when Im Sprayin,
Sendin in Vendettas like a Plague,
So Fed up of you Lames,
Yall will end up wit Letters on yuh Face,
When I Get up on the Stage,
And Play, A Record fulla Flames,
Im a Wreckin ball to Frames,
So this Lesson to be Gained,
Is this Session is Insane,
Lets Venture thru my Reigns.
Till yuh Threatened by my Tapes,
Perfection is my Fate,
Deception is yuh Faith,
Never Wait to Sever Up yuh Wieght,
Never Hate cuz Together we are Great!

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Thu Jun 28, 2007 5:33 am

some feed would be nice

16 Micz · Post by **16 Micz** » Thu Jun 28, 2007 5:40 am

that first one was dope, u killed tha beat, with that raw old school hip hop feel, the rhymin,delivery, and flow was on point, cant complain on tha, the quality was decent, overall a pretty good track, showing some nice elevation man,

and for the second one i liked too, the flow was dope, the lyrics and multis were fire, the delivery was nice as well, like i said, yshowin some elevation, only bad thing i can say bout this is every now and then u take those deep breaths, not too noticable, but if u make it to a professional level, it will be...

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Thu Jun 28, 2007 5:41 am

right, yeah im always tryin to improve my breathin..

and thanx for the feed, its appreciated fo reel.

StiLL UppIN

Lawgix · Post by **Lawgix** » Thu Jun 28, 2007 5:47 am

yo yo what it do? these were some really nice drops Ghost.... the first one was fire... and its cool to listen to ur audios cause u can always expect somethin good from you... nice job man... these were consistent as hell... good job homie

Gutta · Post by **Gutta** » Thu Jun 28, 2007 8:09 am

i thought u flowed with the beat pretty nicely on both the tracks i wish there were more verses for each song tho. i wadnt a huge fan of your voice in the first song, but u had deeper lyrics on that track. the second track i really liked haha i thought it was better than Jim Jones version lol but yea keep it up man

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Thu Jun 28, 2007 8:49 am

I only listened to the first one so far but pretty impressive compared to the other drops and the bars made more sense then usual.

The emotion was a lot better too. I could see you being pretty good if you keep at it.

I'll try to leave feedback to the other one later, but I'm busy as fuck.

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Thu Jun 28, 2007 2:16 pm

thanx for the feed guys, i really appreciate it.

UppIN

Dead Silence · Post by **Dead Silence** » Thu Jun 28, 2007 2:37 pm

I liked them but i really liked Pace Maker ur flow was really good but i think u should do a full track thatd be hot

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Fri Jun 29, 2007 11:40 am

thanx for the feed back man, its appreciated, suprisingly this is my first audio in like 2 months or so....lol

B-Bear · Post by **B-Bear** » Sun Jul 01, 2007 7:28 am

First one - FIRE!

.. but i always find somthin to pick on s u have somethin to work on... suprisingly it's your breathin.. u're a smoker right? anyway, try and spit a whole bar instead of breathin evry time u get to a comma.. then u'd get an even better flow..

Second-Impressing!

The flow was tight, altough u fell off a few times (example marked)

"Lets Venture thru my Reigns.
Till yuh Threatened by my Tapes,
Perfection is my Fate, <----
Deception is yuh Faith <----------
Never Wait to Sever Up yuh Wieght,
Never Hate cuz Together we are Great!

overall u're really stepping your game up!!! i'm seriously impressed man.. keep it comin!

Kurse · Post by **Kurse** » Sun Jul 01, 2007 11:55 am

As for We Fly...you already know what I think about that one. It was a decent audio from you...cleaned up nicely though..so thats good.

Now the newer one PaceMaker...that's where you see the growth in Symbolikull audio! Better breather...the quality wasn't as bad as we've heard in the past..the words were real strong. Now this was definately worth the download...so great job man..keep up the hard work. Your practices are evident my friend.

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Sun Jul 01, 2007 1:30 pm

thanx for the feed and criticism its greatly appreciated....

big ups

134282 · Post by **134282** » Wed Jul 04, 2007 2:03 am

How you spat in the second piece is how you should've spat in the first piece. You were too calm, too reserved in the first one. When you rap, you have to make the listener feel what you're saying. Be aggressive, devour the mic, act as if you're spitting some shit that's gonna crush the whole world. Come hard or don't come at all.

When DMX first came out, I didn't think he was all that. His skills aren't anywhere near other rappers' skills. But people like to hear him. He's got a raspy voice and when he barks into the mic, you fucking listen. Eminem completely lacks base in his voice - typical white boy rapper - but he separates himself from the rest by being aggressive and making the listener feel every word.

Canabis is dope. But his sound sucks. Where is he now...?

Puffy. Stoooooooooooooooooooops. You only hear him on tracks these days because he signs the checks of the people whose singles and albums are dropping.

Fifty... Talks with a lisp, but delivers in an almost conversation-like way, complete with emotion.

Jada Kiss... Another one with a raspy voice... I can't stand to listen to any of the shit he says, but apparently other people can. He's got a distinct sound and that counts for something.

Coke hits - this guy - starts off tame and not very interesting, but he picks up the slack half way through and begins to exert some aggression.

You need to find your sound. Once you find it, mold it. Mold it into a ball and hurl it at people. Or mold it into a rocket launcher and fire it off at people. But whatever you do, don't mold it into a tissue and wipe people with it. You have to be a aggressive. People won't give you their ears, so you have to fucking take their ears. Snatch them shits and MAKE them listen. Make them feel so paralyzed by your sound that they truly believe they don't have a choice. Make them believe that they HAVE to listen to you. The world won't make room for you. You have to grab that motherfucker, squeeze its neck and scream in its face. No go fucking get that shit.

Two IN One!!!!!!

Two IN One!!!!!!

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