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SequencE

It's not done, going to probally redo it and make more in order.

Yesterday you was a good great "A" student always on the honor roll in school//
Today you now a slut permanently for the rest of your life, think thats cool?//
Knew ya since birth, that shit was the worst, never talk to ya again, understand?//
More guys lookin to you for sex cuz the money you get goes toward getting tanned//
Keep talkin to me on AIM, everyday, non stop, I never liked you bitch get a life//
how can you say that you fucked guys, and not call yourself a slut? c'mon get it right//
chattin to me on AOL, sayin ya wana blow me, well your friend told me you also lesbian//
Right before you too fuck you get all excited when he usees the saying "Let Me IN"//
Remember when we was around 6-7 and we went to the corner, and undressed eachother//
Even when you where at a young age, you still got horney and wanted to fuck one another//
you aint even a 'hot chick' and your always riding 'ones dick' "pulling a baby out a pussy, aint no "magic trick"//
touch the dick, it doesnt matter to you of what he makes you do, as long as you get to lick the "magic stick"//
Years Ago, Right after we ate Chinesse Food late Friday nights, watch a movie and cuddle on the couch//
Now, Get fucked in the pus all night, by your sister wearing your strap, while you keep screamin OUCH//
Skinny dip in the pool late at night, because you were ready to fuck, I was at one end, you was at the other//
Fuck her maybe once, and move on their no relashion ship to actually sit down, watch a movie and 'love her'//
Stephine, dont keep asking me if you can lick Mr. Henrey cuz ur hungey, get a plastic sergey and than well talk//
As long as I can remember, you was always acting like a slut, wanted to make out at any possible moment//
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why cant you guys leave posts the way the acutal user posted them?
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Re: Diss to this girl I known since birth.

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BigP wrote:SequencE

It's not done, going to probally redo it and make more in order.

i hate you bitch yo used me and abused me
u wanted to trade genitals but never gave me ur pussy
our fat bodies hot and sweaty against each other in friction
steamy sex lookin like two walruses making love
then you dissed me for being not hung well
SO FUCK U BITCH its not the size its if u use it well
youz a slut you brought men home to my crib
askin for a place to stay, fucking them in my crib
while i was in the next room, my heart breaking I HATE YOU
i had so many dreams about breakin down ur door to RAPE YOU
you always said my double chin was cute and i believed you
even though u were using me as another fuck i cant believe you
LMAO..I know this isnt your drop..
"our fat bodies hot and sweaty against each other in friction"..EWW..
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SlickMex wrote:
BigP wrote:SequencE

It's not done, going to probally redo it and make more in order.

i hate you bitch yo used me and abused me
u wanted to trade genitals but never gave me ur pussy
our fat bodies hot and sweaty against each other in friction
steamy sex lookin like two walruses making love
then you dissed me for being not hung well
SO FUCK U BITCH its not the size its if u use it well
youz a slut you brought men home to my crib
askin for a place to stay, fucking them in my crib
while i was in the next room, my heart breaking I HATE YOU
i had so many dreams about breakin down ur door to RAPE YOU
you always said my double chin was cute and i believed you
even though u were using me as another fuck i cant believe you
LMAO..I know this isnt your drop..
"our fat bodies hot and sweaty against each other in friction"..EWW..
lmfao...
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Post by complexity »

Hmm. First word that comes to mind is disturbing.

"Remember when we was around 6-7 and we went to the corner, and undressed eachother//
Even when you where at a young age, you still got horney and wanted to fuck one another//"

Nice memory. Maybe a little bit to young to be a pedophile. Yes?

"you aint even a 'hot chick' and your always riding 'ones dick' "pulling a baby out a pussy, aint no "magic trick"//
touch the dick, it doesnt matter to you of what he makes you do, as long as you get to lick the "magic stick"//

Shorten your bars. You will seem less inane.

"Stephine, dont keep asking me if you can lick Mr. Henrey cuz ur hungey, get a plastic sergey and than well talk//As long as I can remember, you was always acting like a slut, wanted to make out at any possible moment//"

I'm not laughing?

Final thought: Never EVER EVER write something like this again. The entire concept is ridiculous, and obviously very disturbing.

Maybe a team consisting of a psychologist, therapist, and counselor, would help you handle them traumatic memories, in a more productive manner then posting them on this site.
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complexity wrote:Hmm. First word that comes to mind is disturbing.

"Remember when we was around 6-7 and we went to the corner, and undressed eachother//
Even when you where at a young age, you still got horney and wanted to fuck one another//"

Nice memory. Maybe a little bit to young to be a pedophile. Yes?

"you aint even a 'hot chick' and your always riding 'ones dick' "pulling a baby out a pussy, aint no "magic trick"//
touch the dick, it doesnt matter to you of what he makes you do, as long as you get to lick the "magic stick"//

Shorten your bars. You will seem less inane.

"Stephine, dont keep asking me if you can lick Mr. Henrey cuz ur hungey, get a plastic sergey and than well talk//As long as I can remember, you was always acting like a slut, wanted to make out at any possible moment//"

I'm not laughing?

Final thought: Never EVER EVER write something like this again. The entire concept is ridiculous, and obviously very disturbing.

Maybe a team consisting of a psychologist, therapist, and counselor, would help you handle them traumatic memories, in a more productive manner then posting them on this site.
What's wrong with it, I dont think its that bad...
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Post by complexity »

That's where your lack of brain development comes into play.

"Years Ago, Right after we ate Chinesse Food late Friday nights, watch a movie and cuddle on the couch//
Now, Get fucked in the pus all night, by your sister wearing your strap, while you keep screamin OUCH// "

That's not remotely good at all. It's completely ridiculous.

I'll just stop leaving you feedback. How's that?
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complexity wrote:That's where your lack of brain development comes into play.

"Years Ago, Right after we ate Chinesse Food late Friday nights, watch a movie and cuddle on the couch//
Now, Get fucked in the pus all night, by your sister wearing your strap, while you keep screamin OUCH// "

That's not remotely good at all. It's completely ridiculous.

I'll just stop leaving you feedback. How's that?
Think you and all of us should..
This is a stupid ass written..Not only that but he talks about puss and strap ons..and being naked at 7?..WTF?..
Yall know damn well this kid is a virgin lmao..and shit is not cool to picture man..Someone should delete this on the real..
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ummmm...ur dissing some girl......no one knows who da fuck she is...n for ne one who might.....which im pretty sure is nobody....they still dont care.....n it was rediculous..i skimmed thru it...n i rather slit my wrists in a bathtub full of icewater then read that again
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Viral wrote:ummmm...ur dissing some girl......no one knows who da fuck she is...n for ne one who might.....which im pretty sure is nobody....they still dont care.....n it was rediculous..i skimmed thru it...n i rather slit my wrists in a bathtub full of icewater then read that again
And the ice water is mixed with lemon..ouch
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yo slick u aint respond to battle. so I guess i won? 24 hours was up.
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