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A Cypher by Khan-Verse and Tha Phantom

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Tha Phantom:
Roll a blunt and to free-ya-mind./
Smoke it up and releive-some-time./
I wanna see the end-of-the-line, Hoping to not break-down./
I'm hungry but for what? is there anything I can take-now./
Life is just a bitch it needs to be fucked./
Trying not to get to pissed or give up./
I don't know why the fuck-I-try./
I'm to the point to just give up and just-die./

Khan-Verse:
We see the point Eye-To-Eye, Burn That Blunt and let's High-To-Fly//
Life can Take You No Where-Fast//
When you go through the Trash-Rip-Through-n-Blast//
Now I understand we all Have-Problems//
And With Some Of us Drinking And Smoking Solve-Em//

Tha Phantom:
It's so much pain, So many thangs, It's like a maze i'ma go insane./
I got the simple shit off-my-chest./
Too the point to put alot-at-rest./
I wanna smoke and get High-as-the-rest./
Just give up don't try-to-come-at-the-best./
This isn't directed towards anybody but you should quote-that-line./
I'll end yo life quick my minds the barrel and the clip i'll smoke-yo-mind./
Owned-by-that-nine,It's my turn to shine i'm simply getting off anger./
No-i'm-not-fine, I just want to say Hang Her./
Love hurt's, It just wont work.//

Khan-Verse:
my Bones go Berserk, every time I see that Twurt//
She Always Gets The Best of my Emotions//
She's a Witch with Diabolical-Poisons//
That'll Leave my Joy est Thoughts-Broken//
Every Word That Goes unspoken,But I'm Focus on On My Own Path, I'm smart in the mind I'll Do Half-The-Math and Still Pass-My-Class, But When Titans and God Clash, It's a Sight That'll Turn Your Eyes-To-Ash.

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Post by thaphantom »

Yo get outa here with that bullshit i've been on illest longer then you ever thought of it.... if u not gonna post what you think then don't post that shit at all ok playa?
Never let life live you, You always live life.
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Never let life live you, You always live life.
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Post by 16 Micz »

eh its ok, really basic in my opinion, it flowed smoothly, lyrics were ok, both rappers seemed equal, and chemistry seemed there...overall a decent collab, have u even improved over the years scott?
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yeah pretty basic like my skill level lol but it was alright
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