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Fridaynight Freestyle v. 2

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Fridaynight Freestyle v. 2

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Another one. This time i used one of my mics and my pop filter. You can clearly tell the difference. Feed would be appreciated.


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Post by 16 Micz »

eh, i dont kno, its probably the worse track ive heard from you, u seemed to get off beat and change your pace too much, lyrics werent bad tho....its an ok track overall keep it up
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Post by complexity »

You weren't perfectly on beat, but it was fine for a freestyle.

The energy was incredible.

The beat seemed to be to loud though.

Still great to hear this man.

The lyrics were sold throughout.

"way that my truck bang, when i swang on the corner"
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