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MesaR
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WEAK EMCEES 2.

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. Verbally Murder ' Weak Emcees ' With My Powerful FLOWS-AND-RHYMES..
I Anit Claiming Nothing But I " SELL MORE CRACK " Then A-HOES-BEHIND.

. I Am Lyrically Ripping Up This Rap Thing, Nothing Can Beat My " BARS-AND-LINES.
Dissing Me, It Will Be Like A ' TRAGIC EVENT " Ill Easily Put " SCARS-IN-LIVES "

. At My Best.. Its " MUSIC TO YOUR EARS " Like A " HEAD-PHONE-SET..
You ON A TRACK Would Sound Like You and YOUR TESTOSTERONE-NEVER-MET.

. You ' WEAK EMCEES ' You Shouldnt Have " NEVER-SPOKE " OR Touched INK-WITH-PAPER..
I Am Always Dope What " EVER-I-WROTE.. And You VETS Are On The BRINK-OF-FAILURE.

.. Leaving You In Immense Shock, And Nothing But " FEAR-FOR-DAYS "
Cause Its Scary To know I " RIP UP VETS " Just At Thirteen " YEARS-OF-AGE "



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Post by RH1NO »

well if you take my topic at least leave some feed lol

this was a coo lil dilly flowed nicely think it was too short though

. You ' WEAK EMCEES ' You Shouldnt Have " NEVER-SPOKE " OR Touched INK-WITH-PAPER..
I Am Always Dope What " EVER-I-WROTE.. And You VETS Are On The BRINK-OF-FAILURE.

^^fav bars

havent seen nothin from you in a minute this was good though

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Post by MesaR »

Thanks Rh1no.

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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

the bar rhino mentioned was nice,but it way too shortttttttt lol,cool drop tho u shud drop more often its good 2 getta new drop from an old head once in'a while. overall 2 short homie make it longer and keep droppin u sick for 13
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Post by LadySam »

good job buddy, but i dunno i dunno if all the multies ryhmed well.
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Post by EZCome »

This was pretty sweet but i rekon u over use your multies and it fucks up ya flow but other that that it was pretty good man.

Short but good.

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