Mind Of its Own

[Haz]

Try To Open Up My Mind Not Tha Barrel But i'm Still Squeezin
Close My Eyes Hopin i'm Dreamin Tha Man is Hit And i'm Still Breathin
^ i Liked Dis Part..

[complexity]

ey yo, this was pretty good man, I think it could have been a little better with the visual, although it was very descriptive

The rhymes in general were pretty nice.

A bunch of creative concepts.

For example...

"Stoppin At Tha Store Dont Kno Why But i Aint Gotta Mask
Tried To Just Rob Tha Joint But Tha Piece Was So Hot it Flashed
Now i Killed Two Birdz Holdin Tha Same Gun
My Biggest Question Still is Where it Came From "

Overall, pretty solid.

[Mac]

"Now i Killed Two Birdz Holdin Tha Same Gun
My Biggest Question Still is Where it Came From "

Favorite Bar, That Was Solid Right There.
The Visual Was There, Just Needed Better Structure.

Over All, Not Bad.

[Spoof]

yeah I agree the structure could've been better but otherwise this drop is good. The storytelling is nice!

fav line:
Didnt Try To Squeeze Just Waved Tha Piece Tryin Ta Scare Him
Tha Metal Was Clashin While Tha Shell Was Flashin And He Still Wasnt Carin