part of this story tellin piece im doin

[-TraMaTiK-]

earth sucks,heaven gotta be fuckin nicer then this
im seein ur face in every blood drop as im slicin my wrist
carvin vertically makin sure i didnt just go and dice it quick
full moon within the cemetary i saw my wife in the mist
the same dress,the same eyes the same sparkle n smile
captivated me all over again n intrigued me'ta park it a while
her smile shined with beauty and her eyes created a zone
she said 'come back to me papi,please i hate it home
truth is your worst enemy,deception surely can blind
but only the words of pain can exsist in'a shallow mind'
her truth rang thru my ears as if some chimes were near
thoughts racin thru my head,it aint death but time i fear
brain confined 2 this glass damn its gonna bust from the sins
temptation'll over power me which shows lust iz gonna win
floatin 2 the dark side of the moon where must this begin
stars dance among the darkness,memories are dust in the wind
so all the pieces of my mind latch onto the leaves that pass
into a distant world where everyones just believes the past
and they percieve that these words are gonna relieve the mass
amount of pain,that they been thru still tryna concieve the trash
and how it gave them broken wings,but the spoken things
like cars hoes n bitches,somehow always be provokin things

[Cee4]

this was nice. it flowed well and you made good use of multis and vocab. i kinda managed to follow the story cause sometimes i dont know what your talkin about.
this was a different class to your other drop i left feed on.


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so all the pieces of my mind latch onto the leaves that pass
into a distant world where everyones just believes the past
and they percieve that these words are gonna relieve the mass
amount of pain,that they been thru still tryna concieve the trash