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Effects Of E Dating

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Effect's Of E Dating . Sequence Featuring Divine ( Audio Lyrics )

Stop-These-Hoes, Normal Sex I Die With The Thought-Of-A-Sweat..
Never Drop-My-Clothes In Real Life, So I Just Resort-To-The-Net..
Fucking Excellent Show, Till You Find Out That Chicks-Ya-Brother..
Then You Look A Tiny Bit Closer, And See That Shits-Your-Mother..
Chatting Up A Sexy Woman, And That Bitch Starts Stalking-You ..
Everything Is Sweet Till You Find That's A Gangstas Sis Ya Talking-Two
Tempting Addiction Staying Online All Night Till Ya Necks-Sore..
Talking To A Hot Bitch, Witch Really Is Tha Ugly Slut Next-Door..

Divine

Getting Wit Chicks On Tha Net The Eazy Way..
Now I gotta 12 year girlfreind named haily like DZK
sending pics of other people that dont even resemble me,
Becausee in real life, im fat, with acne, and stand 5 foot 3
Fronting Like A G, But Really My Life Is Boring And Basic
Only Concreate Walls I See, Are From My Mom's Basement
Next thing ya know, Sequence and Divine run up inta ya crib
Puttin ya face to ya history display to remind ya what did
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..Fuck that gay shit you say on a beat..
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Stop-These-Hoes, Normal Sex I Die With The Thought-Of-A-Sweat..
Never Drop-My-Clothes In Real Life, So I Just Resort-To-The-Net..

lol

Fucking Excellent Show, Till You Find Out That Chicks-Ya-Brother..
Then You Look A Tiny Bit Closer, And See That Shits-Your-Mother..

lmao

Chatting Up A Sexy Woman, And That Bitch Starts Stalking-You ..
Everything Is Sweet Till You Find That's A Gangstas Sis Ya Talking-Two

haha

Tempting Addiction Staying Online All Night Till Ya Necks-Sore..
Talking To A Hot Bitch, Witch Really Is Tha Ugly Slut Next-Door..

HAHAHAH

Divine

Getting Wit Chicks On Tha Net The Eazy Way..
Now I gotta 12 year girlfreind named haily like DZK

lol

sending pics of other people that dont even resemble me,
Becausee in real life, im fat, with acne, and stand 5 foot 3

hehe

Fronting Like A G, But Really My Life Is Boring And Basic
Only Concreate Walls I See, Are From My Mom's Basement

HAHA

Next thing ya know, Sequence and Divine run up inta ya crib
Puttin ya face to ya history display to remind ya what did

lmao

HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHa

I like the humor, it outshined everything else. I liked the way you set it up.
Changing the story every bar. Good job. 8.3/10
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

well i cudnt really find any quoteables'ta be honest..but this wuz cool tho,flow was good and multis were pretty on point..i saw this wuz 'audio lyrics' so u gonna record this?
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word i am
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Post by Glamtrash »

LMAO That shit's funny as fuck kid.


Not your best, but still better than some I've read. VERY entertaining. Nice concept, haha not something I would have ever thought of, and nice multis. You've got quite the imagination kid....Keep doin ya thing.
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

agree wit the above statements
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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