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Prophet
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Post by Prophet »

Quick key, feed and I'll return the favor

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Fuck wit me, wateva u do, u won't survive homie ya stuck-in-a-rut, fake thugs, I'm roughin-'em-up//
I'm a G u see, always fucking-a-slut, and ya lady ain't holding ma guitar when I say she touching-ma-nut!//

U could get murdered wit-techs,I'm sicker than most rapper's in the game, makes me wonder y I ain't rich-yet//
But its all good cuz I still get mad head, while giving ya female dog a bath is the only time u get a bitch-wet!//

I'm da dopest-dude, n' I don't like boasting-dude, buh fa two months, I was declared most-improved//
Temperamental, I'll shoot ya if I can't cope-with-u, while having carbonised bread is the only time u carry toast,-its-true!//

Fuck paying fa sex, if chick don't wanna give me head, I'll drag her to my pad, n' I'll be raping-tha-bitch!//
Gotta alotta enemies that wanna see me dead, but faggots couldn't leave P on tha floor if they closed they eyes while takin-a-piss!//
Last edited by Prophet on Sat Jan 12, 2008 6:43 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Post by Brah-Vo »

Pretty good piece. It's abit different from what i've seen from ya though.
It's abit graphic especially the last bar made me go wtf.lol.
Nice to see you back homie. I'd give this a 6/10 mostly because i aint used to this from ya lol.
Nice work matey.
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

i would say that your 3rd bar was the best of the verse, but nice shit man
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by Prophet »

Thanks for the feed Raiza and Ghost, uppin some more
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Post by Cee4 »

ha ha good shit. its been a while since i heard anythin from you. like someone said the 3 bars was the best.
i like the last bar too but it aint cool to be a rapist lol. the couldnt leave P on the floor punch was funny.

Fuck paying fa sex, if chick don't wanna give me head, I'll drag her to my pad, n' I'll be raping-tha-bitch!//
Gotta alotta enemies that wanna see me dead, but faggots couldn't leave P on tha floor if they closed they eyes while takin-a-piss!//

yeah man your improvin quickly.
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