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African Nursery Rhymes

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Hold the A-K Hold the A-K
A-K give u power when u spray they lay
When you spray they shout no words can they say
so spray the fuckin devil with they life they pay
they call us rebels because we go against em
We freakier then MANSON call us MENSON
all for the diamonds all for the gold
when you wake up do as your fuckin told
we're the rivals of the rich bitch
we believe in survival of the fittest
Power in numbers we have
people decaying coz we can afford body bags
the gun is more then just for protection
AGREED we use it to stop democracy and election
SEE our views FEEL our pain
we make the sky dark the rain will never go away
things will never be the same nor will they change nor will they say this is the chaos we made
army assaults or air raids never can they stop us from chasing our cause
No one recognizes us no one applauds They call us unfortunate coz we can't afford iPods
guns and broads and a cause is all we need we're fine as we are WE DONT NEED FREEDOM OF SPEECH


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Tried somethin abit different, with the topic and the rhyme scheme.
Words that are capitalized are emphasized for flow if you know what i mean. Lol i dont think how u explain it. but anyway. Enjoy.
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Post by Viral »

it was decent...coulda been better imo...but overall the topic was straight...n the way u came at it was cool...im not sure how that CAPITALIZING the words would let us know how the flow is posed to go....but i think i might have gotten it..lol...anyways....keep droppin man
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Word. Thanks for the feed viral. UPPPPINNN
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

this wasnt too bad, i liked the style that your wrote in, it was kinda kool in a way.. anyways keep droppin kid
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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