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plug ya self in listen to the music
hold on to the moment in a sudden u might lose it
hold on to ya iphone in a sudden u might lose it
replace the actual for the virtual cubes that are rubik
come in diffent shapes and colours you choose the blue bitch
the CDs replaced by DL's stop G's from getting hood rich
thank goodness for your rudeness and your lack of time
you keep track of ya own busines ill keep track of mine
Macs and nines the fuck has this world come to
when we in trouble who will this world run to
Who paid For this Fiasco?*
get the wrong burger complain this aint what i asked fo
the pad and pen replaced by keyboards and microsoft works
internet rap battles feed ya ego leave ya jock murked
boondocks on TV allowed to say nigga the world heard
white boy on a sitcom says nigga only to be censored
men cursed hens burst with eggs? (say what?)
They called it the walking dead when the hearse grew legs
Always want to be better we dont c4 no more we c5
Can we please have this convo lata i dont have time
claiming we alive till the day we die.



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*lupe.
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upping.
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Post by Haz »

Raiza This wus Strait.. i Mean.. It seems Like u Rushed Thru Dis Shit


the pad and pen replaced by keyboards and microsoft works
internet rap battles feed ya ego leave ya jock murked
^ Aiight


the CDs replaced by DL's stop G's from getting hood rich
^ I Unda Stand dat.. aiight..

That "hens burst" Wuddeva Wuddeva i Dont get That line..


u Tried to do Some Wordplay Shit wit C's Name but i Dunno it Didnt come out Legit..


hold on to the moment in a sudden u might lose it
hold on to ya iphone in a sudden u might lose it
replace the actual for the virtual cubes that are rubik

^ Liked this Part the Most...

im Jus Critisizin Dont Take Offense or Nothin.. u Asked for Feed ima Tell U Da Truth lol

Raiza Put more time into Writin instead of Tryin to Rush and Rhyme words jus To rhyme um
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Post by Cee4 »

YEAH THIS SHIT IS GOOD RAIZA. THING I LIKE ABOU U IS U ARE ORIGINAL. U NSAY THE SHOT NONBODY ELSE tals about , FAV LINE WAS THE SAME BIT AS HAZARD SAID. BIT FUCKED CANG BE FUCKE DCHANGIN IT BUT YEAH U IMPFROVIN STEDILY . I DIDNT GET THE BIT WHEN U MENTIONED ME BUT YEAH WAT DID IT MEEENB ?
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Post by Brah-Vo »

@cee, wasnt really referencing you, jus sayin how everyone wants everything to be better and more effeicient, so like people dont want c4 anymore they want c5, ya dig?
lol thanks for the feed though guys.

uppin for moe./
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