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Omega Bill
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America, the worls superpower with the economy in a black hole
While the fat cats sit back and watch their pockets on swole
AK's will fix everything and a carpet bomb keeps the big heads noddin
Its been 4 years searchin through the desert and we still cant get Bin Laden
We got Hussein hidin in a hole when he wasnt even bombin the States
So we hanged his ass and sent him straight through Hell's gates
But where's all the others? Blowin up our land and great plains
Al-Quada's all over the place but we cant get em to name names
History keeps repeating, death is more important than us living
While our families over in Iraq and we pray they can come home for Thanksgiving
We put up them Christmas lights and hope Santa will bring us a soldier
3 months later we get a wood box with a long american flag draped over the holsters
You got North Korea settin off nukes that fall off into the ocean
How many more tries till they make the U.S sink and stop floatin
If mankind dont put a stop to war, war will put a stop to mankind
Stoppin war? We got a better chance of gettin close encounters of the 3rd kind
Now thats pretty sad that our children are gonna grow up havin to duck and cover
While other children are gonna be put in foster homes because they lose their Marine Mother
An that childs gonna grow up and when she gets out History class shes gonna look to the sky
An shes gonna ask the Lord above who started war, and why did her mom and dad have to die

Little piece I just threw together chillin here, waitin to go play some Basketball. I was thinking about my friends family members who are in the war. Feedback would be appreciated.
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Post by Arvincible »

hmmm this is dope dude, i feel ya on that shit. I got some fam out there. But anyways that shit is real.
It gives me the same vibe as the one i "corrupted nations" i wrote, all of this government drama.

good stuff mang
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Post by Cee4 »

yeah this was good. u make a lotta good points here. it means somethin too me coz i got a couple people in Afganistan. Lol i coulda been there myself. when i was in my last year at school i signed up for the army but i failed the fitness test. (cigaretes coulda saved my life lol)

anyway like i said this was straight. u could improve it if u start usin multis. not just in writtens but battles too.


ps. im gonna do a piece on world events/political/religious shit if anyone wanna jump in and make it a collab then pm me
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Uppin for feed.
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Post by Gutta »

fuck the war and fuck the republicans for getting us into this shit. corrupt bastards.

OBAMA 08 fuckers
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