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You frontin like ur words gave me power, That's absurd, I came to devour..
With my desert bird, got bullets raining showers on you nerds..
I'm so powerful left the twin towers up on the curb, and you actin like u ghetto
But u surrounded by the burbs,


Don't you dare spit at this, I pop in a clip and then tear ligaments
Scare niggas with, my impared sentences hot enough ta flare cigarettes
Sippin Guinnesses with niggas that, kill niggas who kill niggas
That been sentenced to life in imprisonment, I take a nice bitch and then
Get right, intement like when ya dick decide it like clitoris
Cant count all the bitches that my nine mill'll hit, even if I'm concealin it
Ya betta know im still equipped with it, we still livin life in cages like Nicholas
I strike venomous, sendin men to meet the ancestor relatives when my beretta hits
I'm a lit fuze, My type is trifle, known to hit dudes and take they life with a sniper rifle
Every rhyme I write, belongs in the rhymers bible, bout to blow up like dynamite
And take ya shine and title, We kinda wild, I don't think u with that kinda style
Here's the truth cat, not to brag at you, but me and the Mic are too compatible
I spit the truth in the booth with animals, battle dudes like Juice and Supernatural
I'm something like a killa armed with heat when I get on beats
I'm the type to jack a Muslim for his Islam Piece, half these cats dat live on streets
Quick to spit on Peace, Cuz they know dudes that's quick to get out a San Quentin
When u see ya mans missin send the police a transmission, tall can grippin
Pistol hit ya mans whip when he tried to dip in the land sippin the can
Where I'm from we rubber band strippin, takin the grands, and leavin ya grands missin
Like AC units will get rid a ya fans, my team is something like Jordan and Pippen
I cock the lead and blast, leave ya whole click in debt and laugh
I want my credit and cash, lead my team like Lebron James lead the Cavs
I take head shotz, its like I got cameras on the fifth, I'm quick ta slam ya on the strip
Yall Tom Brady's tryin ta play me, I'm like fuckin Montana on the pitch
Cock the hammers on the clip, Bout to spread on these streets like a deadly germ
But, in poetic terms, I'm simply the best everytime I invent a verse
Left men dead in the dirt when my beretta burst, strike u with harsh words
Instead a curse, I strike quick like lightning when I detect ya nerves
And like I said since I'm spreadin like a deadly germ, I don't battle ya
I'll infect ya first, Betta check ya fuckin step when ya step on turfs
Cuz it could be ya last step on Earth, watch wat cha u say, ya mite regret ya words
Regret ya talk, dudes like us contend with glocks, and dead ya blocks
Choppin heads and rocks, getting GWAP, leavin cops dead on blocks when berettas pop
So quit tryin to get with me punk, quit with the publicity stunts
Southern dudes need ta quit with the Krunk, All I give you niggas is history month
I'll kill u dawg, lyrically or with tha ber-etta. its wut-eva//
cuz u kno i squeeze arms like I'm checkin my blood pressure//


Son I write with the trifeness
Engraved in Tyson
Curse the shots that left BIG and Pac lifeless
-Cormega-Verbal Graffiti
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Post by Gutta »

lookin for sum feedback on dis freestyleeee
I'll kill u dawg, lyrically or with tha ber-etta. its wut-eva//
cuz u kno i squeeze arms like I'm checkin my blood pressure//


Son I write with the trifeness
Engraved in Tyson
Curse the shots that left BIG and Pac lifeless
-Cormega-Verbal Graffiti
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nah bitch u got it all wrong i said dat u dumb motherfucker
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Post by complexity »

When i freestyle/textstyle, I recycle some of my better lines
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Post by Gutta »

so does every one. ever heard of Big L??? LOL
I'll kill u dawg, lyrically or with tha ber-etta. its wut-eva//
cuz u kno i squeeze arms like I'm checkin my blood pressure//


Son I write with the trifeness
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Curse the shots that left BIG and Pac lifeless
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Lmfao Man Stfu
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Post by Gutta »

thanks for the feed TGYH i appreciate it


uppin por favor
I'll kill u dawg, lyrically or with tha ber-etta. its wut-eva//
cuz u kno i squeeze arms like I'm checkin my blood pressure//


Son I write with the trifeness
Engraved in Tyson
Curse the shots that left BIG and Pac lifeless
-Cormega-Verbal Graffiti
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Post by complexity »

Ever heard of Eminem, he uses his pre-written rap battles and recycles them on albums. Lmao
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Post by Gutta »

Haz u jus hate my style or what Bra? wat was so bad bout dis piece dat u gotta be a hata on all of it?
I'll kill u dawg, lyrically or with tha ber-etta. its wut-eva//
cuz u kno i squeeze arms like I'm checkin my blood pressure//


Son I write with the trifeness
Engraved in Tyson
Curse the shots that left BIG and Pac lifeless
-Cormega-Verbal Graffiti
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Post by complexity »

This was probably your best drop yet.

You're not even close to the same emcee you were when you joined the site.
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Post by Arvincible »

gutta got my props on this one dogg, i read ur other drops but its been a while since anybody posted so i didn't even bother.


But plex is right, from what i've read you have to be the most improved.


Instead a curse, I strike quick like lightning when I detect ya nerves
And like I said since I'm spreadin like a deadly germ, I don't battle ya
I'll infect ya first, Betta check ya fuckin step when ya step on turfs
Cuz it could be ya last step on Earth, watch wat cha u say, ya mite regret ya words


^^^these were my fave lines ^^^
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Post by Gutta »

thanks for the good feedback yall
i really appreciate it

uppin
I'll kill u dawg, lyrically or with tha ber-etta. its wut-eva//
cuz u kno i squeeze arms like I'm checkin my blood pressure//


Son I write with the trifeness
Engraved in Tyson
Curse the shots that left BIG and Pac lifeless
-Cormega-Verbal Graffiti
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