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Haz
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The More i Try The More i Fall
is Life One big Game? I Aint Sure At All

The Poor'll Fall Before the Rich Lends a Hand
I Dont Need There Help Till The (End i'll Stand)

From the Hood but i Still Use My Brain
While Fiends Kill There Mind by Using Cane..

i'll Admit i've Done-it-2 Nightmares Were Comin True
Best Friends Sayin "Shaz Drugs is Running you"..

I Crush up Pills no (Remorse) dey Laugh Stead
Not Knowin im Blowin the Thought away dat My moms (Half Dead)..

Hangin Wit Kons, Dealaz & Killaz Who ( Popped Out Tooolz)
Had my Parishoot on My "PLANE" Ready to "DROP OUT SCHOOL"..

i Taught My Self To Hustle Yall Ain Educate Me,
Fuckin My Grades Up Lately Seein Me as a Movie Tryin to "RATE ME"..

Hes Good hes Bad..Hes Hood Hes Mad..Bring a Demon To Earth
How "Could his Dad", Whos Knows!! Dont Worry i Ain You..So..


Get Off Of Dis Green Earth & Go Gossip On PLUDO..
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One Of ur Better Drops My Nizzle. Good Flow To it And Some Quotables. im Not The Biggest Fan Of ur Structure But i Can Still Follow it.

The Poor'll Fall Before the Rich Lends a Hand
I Dont Need There Help Till The (End i'll Stand)

i'll Admit i've Done-it-2 Nightmares Were Comin True
Best Friends Sayin "Shaz Drugs is Running you"..

I Crush up Pills no (Remorse) dey Laugh Stead
Not Knowin im Blowin the Thought away dat My moms (Half Dead)..

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Could've Made This Drop Longer But it Was Still Good, Keep at it.
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AKA SCOTCH HALL, MOE MEIJER & MOMEIJAH.
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Post by M.O.B »

good shit nigga i like one, same bars as these dudes
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Post by Omega Bill »

Aye good shit man.

I Crush up Pills no (Remorse) dey Laugh Stead
Not Knowin im Blowin the Thought away dat My moms (Half Dead)..

Thats some deep shit right there. My favorite bar in the whole drop cause thats some real shit and you cant jus say that kinda stuff, that shit means somethin down deep and hits home.
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Good Lookin Out My Dood..
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