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Politically Incorrect #7 - My Missions Completed

Post by complexity »

Honestly, who is out destroying the truth
you blame me, everytime I make noise in the booth
I poison the youth with this led fillin
did I mention, i'm a dentist, leaving kids heads drilled in
your boys in a shoot out and i spread killin
I'm "off the wall" like pictures of dead children
it's like I knocked down them buildings
the way I didn't care about 1000s of killings
when 9/11 came along it's like I jacked the flight
kidnapped the pilot with an iraqi knife and crashed it twice
i must be righteous cuz I came back in the afterlife
to be around when-ever disaster strikes
i'm assassine like, taking away ur childs best book
i'd rather die than write a complex hook
let's take a complex look at why crack rocks used
it's because of what we do, you can ask fox news
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We are living in frightening times
young kids are writing rhymes instead of inciting crimes
I enlighten minds, giving validation
they throw their illmatic tape in for navigation
I'm the inspiration for a whole generation of youth
who find more than hope when they ventilate in the booth
spraying the truth, whether it be politically incorrect
it's always complex, literally or indirect
subliminally or definitively, it's the ability to speak
lifting bars even when physically your weak
more specifically it's promising imagery to seek
finding symmetry with beats in the heat of the moment
using your verbal skills to beat your opponents
you only have your ears cuz your vision is depleted
that's when "hip hop" is needed and my mission is completed
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Post by Brah-Vo »

This a dope piece right here plex.
The flow was great and the imagery is amazing.
I liked the first part better, flowed smoother and was much more technical.
Good job.

"it's like I knocked down them buildings
the way I didn't care about 1000s of killings
when 9/11 came along it's like I jacked the flight
kidnapped the pilot with an iraqi knife and crashed it twice
i must be righteous cuz I came back in the afterlife "
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Post by Glamtrash »

Good shit guy. FUCKIN' AWESOME TRANSITION lol.

Seriously though, you know you got talent.

Rock on.
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Post by Arvincible »

damn plex this shit is real, you made it nice and clear with ya topic and ya structure and flow was reaal nice mang.

i havent read a better drop in a while.
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Post by thaphantom »

Nice shit homie.... u been good wit dis shit yo hit me up when u get the chance
Never let life live you, You always live life.
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

personally... thought this was one of your better pieces ive seen from you, or at least ina while. shit was mad dope man, perfect flow within ur words.. congrats 9.7/10 cuz aint nothin perfect homie
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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