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The new world order set sail, on project extinction, planes wit chemtrails,
Plagues invade cement jails, were doomed, we've tried but our threats failed,
Searchin for world dominance, yes Nostradamus' intelligence is ominous,
The U.N. bringin the problems in, its like fuckin this country condomless,
This is where it stems from americans scared again so they fightin for bush,
The towers fell initializing a boost, adaptin to those ppl most likely to push,
No facts were givin jus guns n ammo, a devil who sent his son to handle,
A battle, to turn the sun to shadows, mind control like we love the scandal,
Indure torture for life, the service enforcing its size doin more than divide,
A world apart, its formin a side, like pray to the lord or ur forced to survive,
On ur own, no help from the ppl, if we have rights why are we succumbed in evil,
We were once an equal, part of a trust, now feeble laid out done ina deep hole,
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by Cee4 »

everything about this was dope. vocab flow message, everythin was straight.

i liked the first couple bars but like i said the whole thing was good

The new world order set sail, on project extinction, planes wit chemtrails,
Plagues invade cement jails, were doomed, we've tried but our threats failed,
Searchin for world dominance, yes Nostradamus' intelligence is ominous,
The U.N. bringin the problems in, its like fuckin this country condomless,
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thanx for the feed man appreciate it
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uppin
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Post by Omega Bill »

This was real nice man. I like how you can jus go n go n go and NOTHING seems forced at all and no bar gives off any tone of a filler line.
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Post by Brah-Vo »

FUUUCK man!
Im fuckin impressed/

Your vocabulary was amazing, and the message it sent across was fuckin deep.

Sorta like Lupe witta bitta Nas man.
This shit was dope.
Awesome job!
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Post by thaphantom »

Mad ill homie i liked the whole thing but what stuck out the most was this

This is where it stems from americans scared again so they fightin for bush,
The towers fell initializing a boost, adaptin to those ppl most likely to push,
No facts were givin jus guns n ammo, a devil who sent his son to handle,
A battle, to turn the sun to shadows, mind control like we love the scandal,

That shit is so true...keep up the good work...and everyone else already said what this shit was...deep vocab and deep ass meaning homie
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

appreciate the feed guys....

UppIN
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