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Aye, C4, I think you should read diss

Post by Omega Bill »

Ayo Cee, I woulda called you out to another battle but I know the votes youd sway
An it would only taken you 2 minutes to bust out notepad.exe and paste the notes you save
Makin bets about leavin the site, good thing Haz didnt accept because votes aint in your favor
White trash E-thug gonna get dissed out here quick. layin still till I put the coroners to labor
Quit tryin to beef with me when you a symbol of a veggie, Imma leave your circular dome dark
Im not gonna shoot you though homie, Im gonna use some of that C4 to blow up your modular home park
No one votes in your battles because low expections is what everyone expects from the poor dude
You too slow to catch up to everyone so stop racin, cause you're gonna forgotten quicker than your whore crew
Gods Of War? HAHAHA, Im glad you got a personality because your title should b Queen Of The Corner
Because the best work you do is head up and on your knees looking at your homies needs as they order
"Oh no, I actually got a vote FOR me and Im gonna automatically think it got deleted
Because I made a stupid bet and if I lose this one then my whole rep will be deplated"
Well let me explain this loud and clear so theres no confusion incase you caught an ear infection
You aint never gonna get a rep anywhere when you keep dickriding on a site with a queer intention
Cant use a multi? Son, Ive been here 2 months an Im better than you who sways people with a sack of votes
After you read this boy I think you need to open your eyes and realize you should just stick with your jack n coke
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

"Oh no, I actually got a vote FOR me and Im gonna automatically think it got deleted
Because I made a stupid bet and if I lose this one then my whole rep will be deplated"
Well let me explain this loud and clear so theres no confusion incase you caught an ear infection
You aint never gonna get a rep anywhere when you keep dickriding on a site with a queer intention

that was the better of the bunch... it was hit or miss in my eyes, i think you dragged it out to much, punches were there but they took so long to hit it wasnt as hard hittin as it could of been.
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by Haz »

Quit tryin to beef with me when you a symbol of a veggie, Imma leave your circular dome dark
Im not gonna shoot you though homie, Im gonna use some of that C4 to blow up your modular home park

LoL^


Gods Of War? HAHAHA, Im glad you got a personality because your title should b Queen Of The Corner
Because the best work you do is head up and on your knees looking at your homies needs as they order

LMAO.. Wow this Line had Me rollin like it had Weed in it LoL...

Well let me explain this loud and clear so theres no confusion incase you caught an ear infection
You aint never gonna get a rep anywhere when you keep dickriding on a site with a queer intention < LOL

"keep dickriding on a site with a queer intention" .. ( u Shitted on Him.. With a Personal. & a funny ender)


Cant use a multi? Son, Ive been here 2 months an Im better than you who sways people with a sack of votes
After you read this boy I think you need to open your eyes and realize you should just stick with your jack n coke < LoL

personals.. LOL.. it Seems like ur Learnin how To Humiliate some1 Heavy now..


From Gods of War To Below

u Came Strongest in The Verse.. i Enjoyed the Read LoL .. i Doubt Cee'll Drop bac At U
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Post by Brah-Vo »

Wow.
Deff one of your best pieces, But it was still far from perfect.
Like the others said, bars are too stretched, if u gonna stretch em out like that make sure u have multis inbetween or have inner rhymes, like how hazard does his bars, more then 1 multi.

The punches were funny as fuck, u used multis which are good, and sweet personals.

GJ.
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Post by Cee4 »

lol. this was alrite 4/10

Ayo Cee, I woulda called you out to another battle but I know the votes youd sway

nice bit of psycology. it really means u are too scared to call me out.

u dont wanna battle me
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Post by Omega Bill »

This comin from the bitch ass who wont drop a verse to respond. Nice one.
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Post by Cee4 »

u got 2 choices here Jill

1. u admit ur scared to battle me and i`ll respond in the scriptures
2. fuckin battle me. 8 bars this is my callout
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Post by Gutta »

awww shit nigga
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Post by Omega Bill »

How about you respond in The Scrips AND battle? Unless you're too un-creative to make 2 seperate verses?
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Post by Arvincible »

lmao this is funny dude

i got a question tho, how come you call people out with drops? shouldnt you save all ur damn anger in the battle? u used up ur good liness against ekoms in ur callout too lol hahahaha

"Oh no, I actually got a vote FOR me and Im gonna automatically think it got deleted
Because I made a stupid bet and if I lose this one then my whole rep will be deplated"
Well let me explain this loud and clear so theres no confusion incase you caught an ear infection
You aint never gonna get a rep anywhere when you keep dickriding on a site with a queer intention

u should have innar rhymes like rs said, that might be the answer to perfecting ur style hehe idk
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Post by Cee4 »

son i just got home and im fucked.
i might drop 2moro skeet skeet bizzle shizzle dizzle fAGGOT
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Post by Brah-Vo »

BIZLLEMAHNIZZLE SKET SDLSDGJKLSDGJKLSDG
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Post by Gutta »

ya y dont yall battle in the battle section??????????????????????? just a thought...


i mean im not calling u a dumb motherfucker or nething but battle Cee in the fucking battle section
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Post by Cee4 »

skeet skeet. yeeeeeeaaaaaahh. crunked out my nut. lol bet jill dont get it
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Post by Gutta »

who da fuck is Wild Bill? wats dis nigga got against C?
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