Strictly Poetical

[thaphantom]

So many things that I wish I could change.
Things wont ever be the same and that's ashame.
Right now lost in a circle.
I'm tired of being hurt too.
Can't change the fact that i'm emotional.
Truthfully I don't know what to do.
Loving you seems to be what's right.
You don't see through my eyes iight?

Please you can't judge the fact that I drop tears.
Open hearted and minded you see my fears.
Everyone know that i've been through alot of pain.
The truth is everyday I go more and more insane.
I don't know how else to express my feelings.
Can you help my heart with it's healing.
All the time I have so many thoughts just rushing through my head.
Love, Ha my love for you is full, but yours for me is what's dead.

[~Symbolikull~]

this is jus like the other one, lol still basic and kinda bland.. try to get deeper in meanins n shit

[Omega Bill]

Not bad. Thing you have to work on the most is using better wordplay and spicing up your lines.