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freestyle-d-poem-what-i-don-t-understan ... html#65456



Liiisten.. Uh.. whos Most Consistent Tell Me?!?!
Im Laughin At Yall


Writers Block Inflicts Dere Pen i Mus be tha Flu "Siq-in-Men"
once this Sand " drops" u Kno The Clock is TICK-IN-DEN..

Raiza.. Sharp?? u Kiddin Dun he Cant "Cum harda" den he Did-in-Son
Sequence Knows its True, sum1 Needa Call G.O.W "fat team" wit ya UN FIT CREW

you guys cant go Back & forth "Sequence" fuckin sum1 up when Raizas BACK IS FORTH
Afta i Murda Sequence dey'll say how can "He loose" cus Doods Sippin 2 Much of C's BOOZ.

And Cee's a Little Two Drunk, u get no brain & knowledge Wise u kno LITTLE -2 - PUNK..
This ain a United Kingdom u Servents face X-iLE Hoppin ova da Line Lyk u Doin it MEX STYLE
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Hahahahaha nice shit homie....unique but nice...
Never let life live you, You always live life.
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Was whack honestly.
Every day your pieces make less and less sense.
Try writing in actual english instead of some weird paki language.
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lol^ if it Wusnt bout him he would be like

"DOPE AS FUCK dudeman!".. shutup niggah
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Writers Block Inflicts Dere Pen i Mus be tha Flu "Siq-in-Men"
once this Sand " drops" u Kno The Clock is TICK-IN-DEN..
^^^
this punch is pretty decent. nothin special



Raiza.. Sharp?? u Kiddin Dun he Cant "Cum harda" den he Did-in-Son
Sequence Knows its True, sum1 Needa Call G.O.W "fat team" wit ya UN FIT CREW
^^^^
sequence never dropped one bar with GOW as far as i know so wouldnt say he was in the team. Gods Of War wasnt unfit. All the drops got good feedback usually from you so thats a contradiction.



you guys cant go Back & forth "Sequence" fuckin sum1 up when Raizas BACK IS FORTH
Afta i Murda Sequence dey'll say how can "He loose" cus Doods Sippin 2 Much of C's BOOZ.
^^^^
punchline never hit hard at all. and im a greedy batard. NO ones sippin on my booze



And Cee's a Little Two Drunk, u get no brain & knowledge Wise u kno LITTLE -2 - PUNK..
^^^^
i "kno" little. some punch. why cant u carry a rhyme over 2 lines?

overall this was pretty poor and im not just sayin that.
honestly i think u should take a break coz your shit is getting mad repetitive now.
a bunch of ebonics with a punchline you`ve bitten . word to rosa parks. know what i mean?
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Post by Brah-Vo »

^^^ actually sequence dropped some bars with G.O.W in that Mythology drop thing.
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my bad then. i dont remember a mythology drop. must of been when i was off the site.
what happened to the Illest Militia?
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Post by Brah-Vo »

^^ nah u dropped in it as well cee.
I'm tryna find it but i cant.
And uhh.. i think illest militia is dead. Domino never really had the drive to push it up.
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Post by Haz »

Nah

Tha Milita Aint Dead.. Dom's jus Sittin Back Smokin a Coheba

Me & TOYH Still Murdain Dis Site
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

i wouldnt go as far as sayin murderin this site..... but this wasnt bad but it wasnt anything special, kinda short, other than that keep doin you kid
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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lol Why who would Get in My Way

You..?
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homie chill wit all that irrelevant speech
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by Haz »

lol Yo My Statement aint even Make Sense

i meant Me & TOYH are Active as Hell on dis Site "Murda wise"

Wusnt talkin bout i Go & Murda Every Niggah on Here.. & We already Settled dis Shit out..
it wus a Misundastandin Bout opinions dats All
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