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Afraid of me Rizin

Post by Arvincible »

i been here for a month and a half fightin,
gainin my respect by makin battles excitin
im tired of these cocksuckers hatin to see
a newcomer comin in and takin over the beef
cuz from the start, ya'll took advantage of me,
three losses on my back just after a week
Laughin at the fact im weak and takin wins from my belt,
I got sick of it so then i stood and said to my self

The new mothahfuckah here so open ya eyes and
Look and See the arvincibility causin surprizes
Now Yall motherfuckers check the horizon,
Ya Son's comin up, and ya'll afraid of me rizin

Now im takin shots, liquor and my bullets makin spots
Da kitchen wasnt hot but i came n started breakin pots
Hazard and Phantom hate alike tryna make a datin site of illest
So imma feed'em frisky faggots to some butt rapin gorillas
Precise come out the closet talkin shit like he somethin to fear
when he n Street are in the cyphers like a couple of queers
Like Raiza, Filipino fuck's a damn disgrace to my race,
Whether its a fo'-five or a fuckin penis, he gets aimed in the face,
And Ekoms bettah stop actin like a fuckin nerd wit his graphics
Multi-bitch, imma get kurse n stuff these fuckin birds in the attic
Bill better get off my nuts, he another faggot lovin to connect
Gay comin ta collect, but i aint tryna end up like Domino n Plex.

The new mothahfuckah here so open ya eyes and
Look and See the arvincibility causin surprizes
Now Yall motherfuckers check the horizon,
Ya Son's comin up, and ya'll afraid of me rizin

So then imma..keep mah head up, like a bobble head barreta
and Fire on theese niggas til they couldn't even get up
Honed my skills to get bettah, cocked, locked and loaded
I had some tricks up my sleeve and i had to show it
Exploded in the tournament and drowned a Cee(sea) in denial
now my next victim's Ghost, bitch see ya in the finals

The new mothahfuckah here so open ya eyes and
Look and See the arvincibility causin surprizes
Now Yall motherfuckers check the horizon,
Ya Son's comin up, and ya'll afraid of me rizin

You wanted talent in and get mad that lookin to threat
Watch ya back ya little haters cuz this son is never gonna set
So Fuck yall, imma kill all ya, cuz this beef feedin the need
I dont need no bitches showin love or even leavin me feed
Damn Haters...lol
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Post by thaphantom »

Lmao...i think you're homo cause that's all you talk about....and u still ain't win that battle because ekoms vote dont count and neither does bills...
Never let life live you, You always live life.
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Post by Arvincible »

thanks for the feed bitch, im glad u like it.
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Post by Gutta »

Pretty decent diss, i dunno what u have against all dese dudes but im lookin at da lyrical content

So then imma..keep mah head up, like a bobble head barreta
and Fire on theese niggas til they couldn't even get up

i liked dat line

had a pretty good hoook

and it was a solid piece, coulda had more punclines or better wordplay, and multis but it was still strong


keep droppin nigga, theres my feed for u since u always feed my shit

Gracias
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Post by thaphantom »

Compared to what i read on topix you've improved but aye nice battle...why is it every drop you talk about gays though?
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

should've said n drowned a cee in denial(sea in the nile) haha (so oldschool with my shyt)

good stuff tho... now die!!
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Post by Glamtrash »

Not bad kid...You're gettin better.
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Post by Arvincible »

i have a bag full of gay jokes, thats like the theme of most of my raps lol

thank you for the feed guys

uppin for more, im pretty sure a lot of people have something to say about this
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

nott to bad i dont think nayone is hatin on you though, i dont think youve left feed on mine in awhile either you hatin on me now, prolly not, calm ya nerves... this was aight though i liked it had good flow in most parts, and we'll see if i see you there
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by Haz »

Like Raiza, Filipino fuck's a damn disgrace to my race,
Whether its a fo'-five or a fuckin penis, he gets aimed in the face,
And Ekoms bettah stop actin like a fuckin nerd wit his graphics < LoL
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Post by Brah-Vo »

I aint got hate arv ...
Aka Raiza Sharp, R.A.I
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Post by Arvincible »

lol i know
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Post by Cee4 »

yeah this was good. i like the whole diss the whole site thing.
the flow and multis were good the whole way through.
a couple nice punches.

i dont really know whos hatin on you or why u have "beef" with some of these people but yeah the verse is good.
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Post by Arvincible »

no beef actually i just wanted to call everyone haaters for the fun of it
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

im not a nerd with my graphics.. gee willikers homie.. i'm gangster.. gosh..
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