Welcome to Illest Lyrics forum established in 2005.
----
Free Vapes

Water + Fire = x?

Drop your written rhymes in one of the largest collections of original rhymes on the internet. The feedback in our Written Rhymes section will simply amaze you.

Moderators: Loon E Lou, Enlightend

User avatar
~Symbolikull~
Rhyme Dominator
Offline
Posts: 2799
Joined: Mon Sep 25, 2006 4:19 pm
Wins: 37
Losses: 16

Water + Fire = x?

Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

Im under control so I smash the pressure,
Diamond in the ruff notta platinum record,
Cut the bullshit u talkin jus show respect,
Ur jus like me, broke an holdin no events,
Put the mics down, fists up its fight club,
No knifes tucked but ima leave ur lights cut,
It's a vise grip grasp n collapsing ya throat,
Im spittin sick like a fein relapsing on dope,
Ya its more but still its never a war on illest,
Ur flows trapped, he raps to form and build it,
Im quik to take u outside if u think u outshined,
Ghost or sym in drops of the unkrowned rhymes,
Im gone again but instead ima disappear ya soul,
Notta good look 4 u walk-in and mirrors explode,
Im here an u know, its my time u go “duck a sickâ€
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
User avatar
-TraMaTiK-
Unstoppable Emcee
Offline
Posts: 2046
Joined: Fri Oct 13, 2006 7:59 am
Wins: 6
Losses: 17

Post by -TraMaTiK- »

It's a vise grip grasp n collapsing ya throat,
Im spittin sick like a fein relapsing on dope,
Ya its more but still its never a war on illest,
Ur flows trapped, he raps to form and build it,
Im quik to take u outside if u think u outshined,
Ghost or sym in drops of the unkrowned rhymes,
Im gone again but instead ima disappear ya soul,
Notta good look 4 u walk-in and mirrors explode,

loved that part^,flow was nice and multies came in smooth,for some reason that last line just made me lol idk why lol but its good,pretty obvious who this iz directed at,shudda made it longer but its good
User avatar
Omega Bill
Unstoppable Emcee
Offline
Posts: 2313
Joined: Sat Dec 01, 2007 6:56 am
Wins: 23
Losses: 17
Location: New Boston

Post by Omega Bill »

Ya its more but still its never a war on illest,
Ur flows trapped, he raps to form and build it,
Im quik to take u outside if u think u outshined,
Ghost or sym in drops of the unkrowned rhymes,
Im gone again but instead ima disappear ya soul,
Notta good look 4 u walk-in and mirrors explode,



Liked that part a lot. Wish this coulda been longer to put junior in his place, but in all honesty I don't think you're done with him yet, lol.

Flowed well, wordplay was nice, only thing bad is I wish it was longer.
Image
User avatar
~Symbolikull~
Rhyme Dominator
Offline
Posts: 2799
Joined: Mon Sep 25, 2006 4:19 pm
Wins: 37
Losses: 16

Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

thanx for the feed guys, its appreciated


uppin
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
User avatar
thaphantom
Elite Freestyler
Offline
Posts: 350
Joined: Sat Jan 07, 2006 9:32 am
Wins: 0
Losses: 4
Location: Youngstown ohio
Contact:

Post by thaphantom »

good drop homie....i liked almost everything about it....i like how you used that about illest lol that was nice
Never let life live you, You always live life.
Image
User avatar
Viral
Mentally Unstable
Mentally Unstable
Offline
Posts: 3417
Joined: Sun Jan 15, 2006 2:22 pm
Wins: 5
Losses: 1
Location: Chicago

Post by Viral »

for a short subliminal..it was pretty straight...decent use of multis....shoulda made it longer tho....keep droppin
User avatar
~Symbolikull~
Rhyme Dominator
Offline
Posts: 2799
Joined: Mon Sep 25, 2006 4:19 pm
Wins: 37
Losses: 16

Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

theres more comin, thank for the feed tho
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
User avatar
Arvincible
Unstoppable Emcee
Offline
Posts: 2304
Joined: Fri Dec 28, 2007 9:05 pm
Wins: 67
Losses: 18
Location: So Cal

Post by Arvincible »

oooh good stuff lol fuck that nigga too lol jk your verse had me goin tho

the flow went really nice when i read it my dude, real nice.
I hate bein late on the quoting cuz its all taken lol
but to tell the truth i woulda just quoted all of it. Its pretty dope and a decent piece considering there will be more coming, it does sound like an intro too hehe

This is my fave piece from you other than one 16 piece...
Image
User avatar
~Symbolikull~
Rhyme Dominator
Offline
Posts: 2799
Joined: Mon Sep 25, 2006 4:19 pm
Wins: 37
Losses: 16

Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

appreciate the feed
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
User avatar
Brah-Vo
Rap Professional
Offline
Posts: 1713
Joined: Thu May 03, 2007 7:28 pm
Wins: 1
Losses: 14

Post by Brah-Vo »

Dope flow
vocab was amazing as usual.
Should have like a "symbollikull vocab" level lol.
Overall a dope piece.

One thing though, could u explain the topic?
Aka Raiza Sharp, R.A.I
User avatar
Omega Bill
Unstoppable Emcee
Offline
Posts: 2313
Joined: Sat Dec 01, 2007 6:56 am
Wins: 23
Losses: 17
Location: New Boston

Post by Omega Bill »

Raiza apparently you haven't listened to "War on Illest"
Image
User avatar
Brah-Vo
Rap Professional
Offline
Posts: 1713
Joined: Thu May 03, 2007 7:28 pm
Wins: 1
Losses: 14

Post by Brah-Vo »

Is this an ekoms diss?

OHHH
OHHH
fuuuuck

NOW I GET IT.

WATER + FIRE.
fUCK IM A DUMBFUCK. lMAO. MY BAD BOYS.
Aka Raiza Sharp, R.A.I
User avatar
Khan
Dedicated Emcee
Offline
Posts: 81
Joined: Wed Feb 13, 2008 9:47 am
Wins: 1
Losses: 1
Location: Fuck A City, No Need To Rep.
Contact:

Post by Khan »

Im gone again but instead ima disappear ya soul,
Notta good look 4 u walk-in and mirrors explode,

^^Fav. Line

Lol i knew this was gonna happen and so did he.

and by he, you know who im talking about, i think i see a rivalry about to happen.lol

i liked it though, i wanna see what else is gonna happen, im gonna keep my eye on yours and emoks Drops.

Good Shit.
Stand-Your-Ground.
And Be-Real.
If Not.
Then Lay-Down.
And Be-Still.
User avatar
~Symbolikull~
Rhyme Dominator
Offline
Posts: 2799
Joined: Mon Sep 25, 2006 4:19 pm
Wins: 37
Losses: 16

Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

its raiza on not knowin, appreciate the feed though guys... i dont think this will amount to anything other than good ol dissin each other...
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
Haz
Supreme Lyricist
Offline
Posts: 6800
Joined: Mon Dec 18, 2006 1:41 am
Wins: 67
Losses: 70
Location: The Port

Post by Haz »

Damn Yo
So Many Shots At Ekoms in Da Scriptures rite Now lol

Like Viral Said For a Short Subliminal Dis wus Nice

No knifes tucked but ima leave ur lights cut, < ill Line


It's a vise grip grasp n collapsing ya throat,
Im spittin sick like a fein relapsing on dope,
Ya its more but still its never a war on illest,
Ur flows trapped, he raps to form and build it,
Im quik to take u outside if u think u outshined,
Ghost or sym in drops of the unkrowned rhymes, < best Part

You came All Through wid Multis.. Kept um Consistent in ya Flow
Alotta Shots Taken lol .. it Wus a Good Read..
I Wanna see yall Lyrically Sparr..
Image
Post Reply

Return to “Written Rhymes”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 1 guest