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Fighting? Little Freestyle By Khan.

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Fighting?

I'm Tired Of Reading These Little Ass Arguments//
Debating On A Bar-N-Sense, But It's Really To Far-N-Bent//
Meaning, People Jack Up Words And Turn Them About//
Voting, Posting, Hating, This Site-Only-Full-Of-Doubts//
Fakes Like Swagger ,He Bites-Only-Fools-N-Pouts//
Call-outs To Battles, Audio To Text//
Scriptures to Cyphers, Personals To Rep//
Personally Protect, Wack ass Rookies, To Hardcore Vets//
Everyone Has One Goal, Thats To "Make Music"//
But When It All Comes Down You Only Make Excuses//
Kinda Abusive, The Way I Tell It Straight//
Push Yourself Harder, Fuck A Twixs I'm Not Giving A Break.


Was Reading some shit people were posting, thought i spit about it.
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Post by Arvincible »

lol im a big fan of this one.

good piece my dude
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Post by Brah-Vo »

Shit was nice man.
Your a good writer.
Props. keep up.
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Post by Viral »

short n sweet...good multis...i liked it...keep droppin
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Post by Khan »

Thanks for the feed guys, like i said i was just reading alot of shit, i was like "God damn, Stop Bitchin"

so i said fuck it, and spit something on it..lol
Last edited by Khan on Thu Feb 21, 2008 1:35 am, edited 1 time in total.
Stand-Your-Ground.
And Be-Real.
If Not.
Then Lay-Down.
And Be-Still.
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Post by Omega Bill »

Good shit my dude. Really like your flow and use of multis and you never fall off either.
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Post by Khan »

thanks for the feed guys, keep uppin.
Stand-Your-Ground.
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If Not.
Then Lay-Down.
And Be-Still.
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Post by thaphantom »

lol good shit homie...real talk
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

yeah i liked this your syllabols actually fall off in places of your multies, but other than that it was dope, i liked it, it told the truth and your statements made were real.. nice shit homie
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by complexity »

This was straight.

No real extensive thought process, but nothing to shabby.
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Post by Cee4 »

i thought this was dope for a short piece. multis were straight for the most part and the flow was good. good content to it aswell.
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Post by Khan »

thanks, hm i dont think i need to say uppin..lol
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

for a freestyle it was nice, even if it wasn't it was still koo, u basically just said wat was on ur mind n rhymed... spoke the truth so its hard to hate
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