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~Symbolikull~
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Uh, every so often yes, a rookie, he needs his push,
He came out of hidin like a pussy, witout the bush,
Faggot! The closest u get to pistols is ur states shape,
You act like sweetness as u rush for chi to make tapes,
Talkin like ya flow is greater & hence he is serious,
You make no sense jussa end to my sentences period,
I got attacks, trapped in back that'll stab ur face in,
Lyrically? Please spiritually I kill wit no admiration,
Sick like cancer patients stuck in treatments of kemo,
If I came down a level, then we'd be seen as an equal,
It aint a war its judgement day, so bitch fuck ur name an,
You the type to walk thru the hood and tuck ur chain in,
So as u face urself, notice u were carried on the viral collabs,
Ur only chance to inhance ur shots at me is witta nine or a mac,
Im Osama, see the smoke hes the twin towers in his final collapse,
Last edited by ~Symbolikull~ on Sat Feb 23, 2008 4:31 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by Omega Bill »

Ugh, I hate reading your short drops becuase they just end and I know there's gonna be more coming, haha.

Flowed nicely.

Sick like cancer patients stuck in treatments of kemo,
If I came down a level, then we'd be seen as an equal,


I liked those lines, shit was tight.

Lemme guess, more coming soon?
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Post by thaphantom »

why is everyone shooting at ekoms is what im wondering. shit was dope though yo
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

uppin
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Post by Arvincible »

lol cuz koms made a diss on everybody on his audio but yeah..

This was a crisp piece, it was more on the creative side than the rhyming and multis.
I dont think there would be a part two (Bill) cuz this is like a callout to me.
Good stuff Ghost, its good you come out of your absence and hittin the scripts with consistency.
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

haha good shit man, keep droppin n i'll make sure to return the favor,

the flow and punches were nice, especially where u used a quote from wildbill bout viral carrying me on the collabs lol


good stuff tho
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

Talkin like ya flow is greater & hence he is serious,
You make no sense jussa end to my sentences period,
I got attacks, trapped in back that'll stab ur face in,
Lyrically? Please spiritually I kill wit no admiration,
Sick like cancer patients stuck in treatments of kemo,
If I came down a level, then we'd be seen as an equal,
It aint a war its judgement day, so bitch fuck ur name an,
You the type to walk thru the hood and tuck ur chain in,

liked that^good shit homie
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Post by complexity »

Pretty good man.

The personals weren't hard, but they were decent disses. And good flow/creativity.
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

gracias ppl
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Post by Cee4 »

i liked this. the flow was flawless. a couple of nice personals and punchlines. overall this was good. this feed would apply to your other drop dissin Ekoms too
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Post by Khan »

all i can really say is, that i liked it, very nice flow to it.

Good Job Ghost.
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