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complexity · Post by **complexity** » Sat Feb 23, 2008 10:30 am

I was going to collab with Khan. He took to long.

I'm 'living in hate', plex is back 'giving it straight', i got a rap like a 'prison inmate'

Nostalgia, you guys cant 'hide your emotion' we are back with more 'pride an devotion'
we are dropping bombs on rappers and putting you 'inside the explosion'
our arsenal is as 'wide as the ocean', so really who 'wants it here'
me and Khan get together 'once a year' to a round of applause and a 'monster cheer'
that's the 'sound of the gods' and no "police man" is getting 'down with the squad'
we come from the 'underground like the fog' you mine as well be in the circus so you can also 'clown on your job'
i'll throw your 'crown in the dirt' you must admit, beating me in a battle is a 'mountain of work'
it's berserk when we 'on a track' you'll faggots getting eclipsed and this one isn't in the almanac
so what if the 'snare is flat' it's like being a parent because i take 'care of rap'
fuck the beat 'where is that?' don't need it, i create 'terror acts' with 'paragraphs'
that's what I 'call producing' i'm 41 and 11, thank you 'all for losing'
your not a-bill to stop 'fatal shots', they don't 'label glocks' you watch your 'cable box'
cuz you ain't on the streets like an 'unstable cop', you just sit at home and dream of having kurses 'label spot'
your a baby, so get your 'cradle rocked' all you do is 'whine n snitch', I made you a mod, so you didn't have 'time to bitch'
you have 'no flow', your 'rhymes are shit' your 'all so(ul) like a ghost'
talentless fuck that's why you're 'awful when ya post'
i simply 'forget his line' only bill getting signed is mine so I can 'get online'
i was born with a 'great mind', laughing at that battle, it's like stealing watches the way I 'take time'
is this how aggressive you want me to 'make rhymes', only problem is when i target a specific audience it's a 'hate crime'
i could go 'back to political' the fact is, this verse is not biblical this 'track is to literal'
we are gods, our raps will 'riddle you spiritual', Khan, we won't come up short, but we might be a 'little to lyrical'

Khan · Post by **Khan** » Sat Feb 23, 2008 11:04 am

yo this is nice plex, my bad on taking so long, some shit came up and i had to deal with it.

Cee4 · Post by **Cee4** » Sat Feb 23, 2008 2:16 pm

plex i`ll be straight with you i didnt like this piece at all. u are capable of so much more. thats all i can really say cause i know u are capable of producing a lot better than this if u want to.

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Sat Feb 23, 2008 2:21 pm

Cee4 wrote:plex i`ll be straight with you i didnt like this piece at all. u are capable of so much more. thats all i can really say cause i know u are capable of producing a lot better than this if u want to.

Alright, thanks for the feedback.

Cee4 · Post by **Cee4** » Sat Feb 23, 2008 2:27 pm

nah im not trying to be a dick or anything. its just that on your day your probably the best on here by a bit and this is way below ur usual standards. just tryin to give u real feed like you`d give me

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Sat Feb 23, 2008 2:40 pm

Cee4 wrote:nah im not trying to be a dick or anything. its just that on your day your probably the best on here by a bit and this is way below ur usual standards. just tryin to give u real feed like you`d give me

Nah, I was just thanking you for the real feedback.

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Sat Feb 23, 2008 2:45 pm

im agree wit cee here on some things. it mos def was a hit or miss piece, long n stretched lines which are never a problem for you, it was like you were tryin to tone it down to get on khan's level... no offence khan u straight... but there were ups and downs in this plex... im sure your next drop will show this one up.. again your structure was shit in this drop ( where did it come from )

im jus sayin this aint ya strongest piece and i expected more from the title... not bad but not "plex"

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Sat Feb 23, 2008 3:03 pm

"was shit in this drop ( where did it come from ) "

It's basically the style, I use when I'm going on a wordplay/punchline tip.

It was also had a few lines that were plays on a drop I did with Rell and Micz. That got some pretty good feedback.

I was trying to recapture that flow a bit.

And of course, I always respond with a piece that can't be debated after I get bad feedback.

But still uppin.

Thanks for the feedback.

Arvincible · Post by **Arvincible** » Sat Feb 23, 2008 4:33 pm

i liked it. Here plex shows his flexibility moving more to wordplay and hittin a different part of his flow.
I guess it might not be as smooth or its a little deviant from your other shit but a piece is a piece. The drop seemed to be a lot more on the multi side than anything else and you still had your point across.

that's what I 'call producing' i'm 41 and 11, thank you 'all for losing'
your not a-bill to stop 'fatal shots', they don't 'label glocks' you watch your 'cable box'
cuz you ain't on the streets like an 'unstable cop', you just sit at home and dream of having kurses 'label spot'
your a baby, so get your 'cradle rocked' all you do is 'whine n snitch', I made you a mod, so you didn't have 'time to bitch'

^^^that was the best part of this drop to me.

Idk plex, i give you props for keepin this site going and i see ur getting stuff done
but i wanna tell you, you shouldn't get so pissed when ppl expect a lot out of you because you're capable of alot on this site, might as well be proud of yourself for having so many ppl coming to you for help. You get a lot of critics and that's a good thing.

Haz · Post by **Haz** » Sun Feb 24, 2008 7:28 am

Dis Shit wus Wack..

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