I'm a Champion

[complexity]

(Actions speak louder than words, but not when your words are your action - plex)

yo, i've led a life-of-admiration, so when I write-an-aggravation is like-a-disaster-waiting
i'm the type-to-smash-your-face-in, my stroke of genius is twice-the-masturbation
I excite-your-fascination with mic-assassination, this track-is-blazing
i'm past-amazing, commit acts-of-Satan and my audience is back-to-praising
emcees evacuating-the-spot, cuz I'm back-making-a-drop, that's to hot for your ass-to-take
so procrastinate, as your minds dissolve and your brain fluids evaporate at a faster-rate
than ur intelligence can calculate, so make-a-threat, i'll escape-my-death
i got an ace-to-bet, i'll erase-your-quest, and you won't find the end to retrace-your-steps
i've faced-the-best, and meet-the-test, better than the rest who have less-success
you'll want me to address-the-stress, correct? only thing coming off my chest-is-sweat
i'm only trying to impress-the-vets, it's funny when all these newbs call-my-name
it takes a lot for my pulse-to-change, you'll must be insane cuz all the results-the-same
failures, you can fault-your-game, i've already disproved all-the-claims
from these balls-and-chains, tore down their wall-of-shame, and put myself in the hall-of-fame
right next-to-Kareem like Pippen to Hakeem, i brought out the best-in-my-dream
to be an emcee, see this session-is-mean, your point needs a hook if you're questioning-me

I'm a champion...
fight harder than rocky for adrian..
I'm not cocky, I'm a courageous rapper, I can't fake it..
sophisticated, gifted, and hated, slated to make it..
the fact I'm the greatest, is rarely debated..
cuz I'm the champion..

I can't-imagine, standing-back-and watching wack rappers without planning-action
the mics back in my hand-with-passion, my fans-reaction is louder than planets-crashing
i hate generic-rapping, when the snare-is-clapping, I straight-blast-your-ear
like a celestial body orbiting a star that makes-gases-near, I create-an-atmosphere
intergalactic as Nasa's space-quest, it's a safe-bet, that when I make-threats
they come to fruition, press the bass-next and I'll blow up your tape-decks
I'm promoted like safe-sex, I'm stimulating, in every situation I'm intimidating
I'm information, in-your-face-and, more than that I'm a fresh breath of inspiration
in this sinful-nation, who do you know that's dropping-a-better-statement?
i spit three verses without stopping-or-reservation, I drop often-as-weather-changing
it's exhausting-as-celebration, i could toss-in-my-hat, quit, play possum-in-rap
and as soon as the first emcee comes crossing-my-path, he'll have lost-in-a-match
it's like getting shot-in-the-back, i just murdered this track and was caught-in-the-act
i'm dope enough to put scott-in-a-track, and make him look hot-in-a-snap
i have this game locked-like-a-gat, you got-in-my-trap, all your talking-is-smack
how about I shove a gun up your ass so you can really walk-like-a-mack

I'm a champion...
fight harder than rocky for adrian..
I'm not cocky, I'm a courageous rapper, I can't fake it..
sophisticated, gifted, and hated, slated to make it..
the fact I'm the greatest, is rarely debated..
cuz I'm the champion..

Props ghost, I'm fighting-with-abrasions, from my last battle, I strike-like-an-invasion
what I write-is-amazing, put "ice on my wrist" cuz I hold the mic-with-an-enraged-hand
I'm nice-as-an-Asian, I set precedents, my cleverness with lines is evidence
my hesitance doesn't make you better-since, I've got experience like presidents
your presence-is based on present-tense, i got rent to pay and a residence
I excel with excellence, ur negligence is detrimental, your style was accidental
entendre with innuendo, comma, my tempo is like an instrumental
my resentful-flow is continental, united states is where I represent-though
yo, who-am-i-to-conqueror rap, is that what gives you-and-i-the-drama
I look into-the-eyes-of-mama, i feel like a suicide-bomber, i gotta do-and-die-with-honor
one day a serenity came to me like it was meant-to-be, i didn't become an emcee accidentally
so, i split my identities like drug dependencies, I used my mind extensively, mentally
eventually, I saw a potential-me, that's when I wrote split personalities, I changed fundamentally
I became more complex than a gun-assembly, I'd be surprised if my own son-resembles-me
I drop monumentally, I was to told-to-rap-sick, so I spit cold-as-caskets, this flow-is-drastic
i put a hole in the game, so you know-it's acid, please move this drop to old-school-classics

[Cee4]

dope shit here. its like your trying to prove somethin here lol. flow was straight and u went crazy with the multis. it was quite a long piece but it didnt drag in like a lot of the longer drops do.

one day a serenity came to me like it was meant-to-be, i didn't become an emcee accidentally
so, i split my identities like drug dependencies, I used my mind extensively, mentally
eventually, I saw a potential-me, that's when I wrote split personalities, I changed fundamentally
I became more complex than a gun-assembly, I'd be surprised if my own son-resembles-me
I drop monumentally, I was to told-to-rap-sick, so I spit cold-as-caskets, this flow-is-drastic
i put a hole in the game, so you know-it's acid, please move this drop to old-school-classics

^^^^^
dope shit here



i'm the type-to-smash-your-face-in, my stroke of genius is twice-the-masturbation
^^^^
this was my favourite line rom the verse

[Omega Bill]

Oh nice!

One of the best drops I've read on here yet. Went berserk with the multis, flow was nice. Cee said what I was gonna say how it seemed like you are proving something with this drop. A LOT of quoteables in this drop. First 2 verses outshined the 3rd, but that doesn't mean the 3rd was shabby in the least.

Good stuff.

[-TraMaTiK-]

well ill try 2 break this down as much as i can since u took the time'ta leave some feed on those 2 pieces.

1st verse wuz sick i didnt have a problem with it,loved this bar especially tho

i'm only trying to impress-the-vets, it's funny when all these newbs call-my-name
it takes a lot for my pulse-to-change, you'll must be insane cuz all the results-the-same

word^,closing bar for ur first verse was ended well so props.

I'm a champion...
fight harder than rocky for adrian..
I'm not cocky, I'm a courageous rapper, I can't fake it..
sophisticated, gifted, and hated, slated to make it..
the fact I'm the greatest, is rarely debated..
cuz I'm the champion..

that seems like ur chorus n its pretty good,flows decently nothin 2 special but still makes the average reader keep readin.

2nd verse id just quote the whole thing it wuz krazy.

3rd verse i wont say wuz the weakest in my view bcuz after the first bar then i read this

I'm nice-as-an-Asian, I set precedents, my cleverness with lines is evidence
my hesitance doesn't make you better-since, I've got experience like presidents
your presence-is based on present-tense, i got rent to pay and a residence
I excel with excellence, ur negligence is detrimental, your style was accidental
entendre with innuendo, comma, my tempo is like an instrumental
my resentful-flow is continental, united states is where I represent-though
yo, who-am-i-to-conqueror rap, is that what gives you-and-i-the-drama
I look into-the-eyes-of-mama, i feel like a suicide-bomber, i gotta do-and-die-with-honor

mad nice man^,i see u put work in and thats good,good lil chorus and verses were str8.glad ta see plex iz droppin again,always an interestin read,stay up

[complexity]

Thanks for the feed so far.

I made sure, to put in some real vocabulary like you wanted tramatik.

[-TraMaTiK-]

haha bout time man

[Brah-Vo]

Wow.
this is THE best piece i've seen you write plex.
You've really pushed the boundaries on this one.
Never dragged on, kept makin me wanna read.
Ya multis were CRAZY as fuck and your flow was real smooth.
Vocab was superb (rivals ghost's) and shit was just real man.

This was nigh on perfect.
Shit was ... more then dope.

[Ambiguous Realm]

good shit.. too bad u didn't do that well for the battle.. 10/10

asshole lol.. keep it hot bitch

[Glamtrash]

What a way to beat writer's block. This shit's fuckin sick dude, well worth the read. Your best work yet.

[Stratosphere]

Very nice !! Don't know what beat you could rock that to , but as far as a text verse ... Ill - No doubt !

[complexity]

Thanks for the feedback (although I dropped this almost 6 months ago).

You could say the rock the beat comment about a lot of raps, if you just saw the dialect. But as for me I can't rock on a beat period, so who cares, lol.

[- Mutual -]

yeah u may have dropped this 6 months ago but we werent there so we can feed 6 months ago

[complexity]

yeah u may have dropped this 6 months ago but we werent there so we can feed 6 months ago

Nah, I have no problem with it, I've upped other peoples old drops.

[Ambiguous Realm]

haha, yea definitely one of the best drops on illest, only one i believe i ever gave a 10/10 from lol u'd probably end up winning the tourny with this piece..if that shit ever starts, but yea this is one of my favorites from u, and anyone can rock a beat, im living proof of that haha, if i can do it then u definitely can, just quit taking criticism so hard and putting urself down becuz then ur gonna take it up the ass one day and realize u like it haha jus fuckin wit ya man good shit once again