come On

[Haz]

Liiisten!!


They say cop a gun-a-head if u gunna do like silver Trucks and make runz-fa-bread
leave a nigga "holey" enough a nun-a-cred him gods son 2 be, now son-a-head..

Everythin 2 my Peers-is-new lifes Old 2 me these shoes been on me a year-or-two
same steps, a dame swep anotha BITCH K.O'd his chain kep, still the SAME KICKZ

lame pricks who wanna go (neck 2 neck) like a chain pick cus dere acclaimed sick
ain nothin 2 dis dawg cept straind-tics who dumb as fuc but good 2 give BRAIN QUIC

Go to (the Kids Street) you'll see da ( The kids Street) take whoeva Kiddz-Feet
up-side-down Lyk "Southside Nigga Sup-Ride-clown" yall Sum fake thugz

Who try & act like bill nie but cant take slugz
......................................................................

Its simple you Lac real Lyrics cause ya Ass Simple n Wack
ur a dot nah a Pimple infac who cant see me like Dimples in Bac..

i got Enuf punches 2 Ben-a-grill & knock u Out like Ben-a-Drill..
Me i Ben-a-Drill now ima Construction Machine (PIPE DOWN) heres (instructions u Fien)

Sit bac Like blacs in tha White Era Dont play Harry Potta go Check da Right Mirra..
See ya Self Fa Wud u Really-Are a Fuckin Scab on My dick Dat Lef me BARELY SCAR'D

[Cee4]

again the was dope. lots of wordplay and punchlines as usual. the flow was good here too. i prefer it when u keep the rhyme goin over 2 lines.


same steps, a dame swep anotha BITCH K.O'd his chain kep, still the SAME KICKZ

lame pricks who wanna go (neck 2 neck) like a chain pick cus dere acclaimed sick
ain nothin 2 dis dawg cept straind-tics who dumb as fuc but good 2 give BRAIN QUIC

^^^^^
this was the highlight of the verse

[Arvincible]

lame pricks who wanna go (neck 2 neck) like a chain pick cus dere acclaimed sick
ain nothin 2 dis dawg cept straind-tics who dumb as fuc but good 2 give BRAIN QUIC

^^the best bar heh

yo this is raw on the wordplay and rhyme scheme.
Keep up the good work, ur only elevating even more.

[thaphantom]

No point in state'n what was already said you know? but good shit homie

[-TraMaTiK-]

Everythin 2 my Peers-is-new lifes Old 2 me these shoes been on me a year-or-two
same steps, a dame swep anotha BITCH K.O'd his chain kep, still the SAME KICKZ

liked that bar the most^,overall it wuz good,some bars cudda been cleaner but it didnt affect nething in ur piece,stay up

[Ambiguous Realm]

str8 shyt,nothin too impressive.. but it kept my attention for the most part, keep droppin, u improved alot from wat i last remember from when u were just shits n giggles lol..

[~Symbolikull~]

i think everything that could be quoted was haz, but this was good shit my dude, mos def not ur best shit but i liked it, kept my attention while readin it so ups to yuh

[Brah-Vo]

Probably My fave piece from ya.
Your wordplay was better then usual
Flow was nice, but as someone else said id rather u keep Like a standard Bar.
Better Flow.
But who cares the Flow and Structure on This Was Still Nice.
Multis Were nice, a real consistent piece.
Nice work Haz.