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Beat You Easy! It Be My Honor B, And In This Battle I'ma Take Control Like Monarchies
And LME Has A "Slim Shot Of Taking This" Like Eminem Murdered During A Robbery
Yu Been Fake Forever, Leave A Bat Enguled In Ya Lung Until Fuckin Late Decemember
So That There's "Proof He Died On The Club" Without Talkin Murders On D12 Members
This My City Bro, Fuck Your Shit Glow, You Suck Ass Kid! So Why You Even Spit A Flow
Punch Be Leaving Dood "Shy Of A Few Teeth" Like Embarrsed Girls In A Paul-Wall-Video
Wen I Blast! Yu Lake Animal Shelters! Rakin-In-Da-Strays, Nigga I Ain't Fakin-Wif-Yu-Gays
Pull Your Body Outta Windsheild! Jus To Leave Yu Berry'd Under Glass Like Bakery-Displays
Yu Got No Bread! What You A Baller-FOR! Ima Get At Your Moms And Sister! Holler-Whores
And Honestly Your 'Discount/Diss Count For Shit' Sort Of Like Low Quality Dollar Stores
Blades? Watch How Fast The On Gards Came, Smack Ya Quick! Fists'll Bombard Lames!
An Your Punches Couldn't Be "Ack-Your It/Accurate" With Shreiks In Schoolyard Games
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Punch Be Leaving Dood "Shy Of A Few Teeth" Like Embarrsed Girls In A Paul-Wall-Video
Wen I Blast! Yu Lake Animal Shelters! Rakin-In-Da-Strays, Nigga I Ain't Fakin-Wif-Yu-Gays
Pull Your Body Outta Windsheild! Jus To Leave Yu Berry'd Under Glass Like Bakery-Displays
Yu Got No Bread! What You A Baller-FOR! Ima Get At Your Moms And Sister! Holler-Whores
Well welcome to illest
Nice flow man, you already got this shit down. You had nice structure and great punches,
I can tell you're really not new to this eh? This was a nice read, and
with a drop like that you'll have alot of people wanting to battle you soon.
Keep up the good work

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Post by WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT »

Aha Man...Yeah Im Not Too New To This, Paid Some Dues...But Im Still Elevatin, Nah Mean...Thanks For The Feedback..!

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Post by Haz »

Aiight Aiight

Decent Shit

Finally Some Competition Fa Me to Fuck Wid..

Answer My Callout in Da Text Callout Section lets Battle
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Post by thaphantom »

Good shit yo...can't really leave much too it cause i just liked it...
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Post by WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT »

Appreciate all the feedback. Especially that how fast it was done in...Props to all

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orlando go post some feed on mine... what website you comin from?
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I am coming out of Hip-Hop Effect... Still there, not bad some talented heads.. But not as good of a website.
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Post by Arvincible »

yeah this site is pretty dope, really organized heh.

bring fresh talent if you can.


After ur match wit haz, imma set up the same battle.
i got next hah

no need for a callout aite?
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Post by WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT »

Yea sure....Set it up
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

yo good shit,not as good as that battle verse against hazard but its still nice.. keep droppin
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Post by WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT »

Props dogs...aprecciate the feedback

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WILD BILL IS THE GAYEST BITCH ON HERE...NIGGA IS SOFT AS FUCK, I TOLD HIM YOU KNOW IT...IT'S OBVIOUS, HE'S NOT REAL...HIAWASE RD.

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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

this was ill my dude, nice first piece, i wanna see somethin other than a battle verse though, but still this was nice
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by Brah-Vo »

Shit was nice dude.
Flow was real consistent
Punches were iight, so were ur multis.
I like this shit.
Keep Up .
Aka Raiza Sharp, R.A.I
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^No Doubt...Thanks
WILD BILL IS THE GAYEST BITCH ON HERE...NIGGA IS SOFT AS FUCK, I TOLD HIM YOU KNOW IT...IT'S OBVIOUS, HE'S NOT REAL...HIAWASE RD.

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