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Haz
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Your Human Extacy who Impails Teens guess i Gotta "X-X" Like a MALE GENE!
Doms the King Me im The Prince u Got "Chapstick" cus u Wont (Bomb a Thing) - Lip Bomb lol

im Fresh milk ur Sour thats a Olda-Grade Da Milita'll Throw u Out Like SHOULDA BLADEZ!
Think u Can Eat-Me Throw on a Beat-G i'll "End This Battle" Somethin Like a TREAT-T!..

i Easily Pass-Yo-Tex Cus ya Position on illest is Undetermined Like Rell Fias-Co's-SEX!!!
This da Anal Sex Line whoeva wana get beat Ass-Go-Nex (U!?) Turn to Ash-Flow-Pess..

Sequence Tried Be RAIZAS AID but "TOOK OFF HERE" like Somethin he dont need a ( RAIZA BLADE)
im Strtin To Burn & About To SMOKE MASSES cus im "In Focus" Like i put on GHOSTS GLASSES!
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Sequence Tried Be RAIZAS AID but "TOOK OFF HERE" like Somethin he dont need a ( RAIZA BLADE)
im Strtin To Burn & About To SMOKE MASSES cus im "In Focus" Like i put on GHOSTS GLASSES!
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overall i liked this. they were your best bars. especially the first one
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Post by Arvincible »

lol these were great lines you mean lip balm though lol

yyou should've put more dude
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u Know Wut Arv im Gunna Add 4 More Bars
Den Leave Me Feed Aight
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Post by WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT »

Lip Balm/Bomb was a good concept needs more support...
Example:
Mac Shot Clips Made This "Chap Stick" Around And Get Balmed/Bommed Like Puttin On Lip Gloss

LOL you know where I was going tho, not bad...needs a lil rewording but it was coo man
WILD BILL IS THE GAYEST BITCH ON HERE...NIGGA IS SOFT AS FUCK, I TOLD HIM YOU KNOW IT...IT'S OBVIOUS, HE'S NOT REAL...HIAWASE RD.

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Post by Momeijah »

Good Stuff.

Doms the King Me im The Prince u Got "Chapstick" cus u Wont (Bomb a Thing) - Lip Bomb lol

im Fresh milk ur Sour thats a Olda-Grade Da Milita'll Throw u Out Like SHOULDA BLADEZ!
Think u Can Eat-Me Throw on a Beat-G i'll "End This Battle" Somethin Like a TREAT-T!..

i Easily Pass-Yo-Tex Cus ya Position on illest is Undetermined Like Rell Fias-Co's-SEX!!!

These Were My Favourite Lines^ Solid Punches in Each One. Creative With a Nice Flow To it, Which is Basically All u Need For Punchline Pieces But The Multis Were Consistent Throughout Which is a Bonus. Last Bar u Could've Executed a Lot Better, But Good Piece.
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Post by Haz »

Thanks Dom
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Post by Brah-Vo »

Shit was dope.

i Easily Pass-Yo-Tex Cus ya Position on illest is Undetermined Like Rell Fias-Co's-SEX!!!
This da Anal Sex Line whoeva wana get beat Ass-Go-Nex (U!?) Turn to Ash-Flow-Pess..

Sequence Tried Be RAIZAS AID but "TOOK OFF HERE" like Somethin he dont need a ( RAIZA BLADE)
im Strtin To Burn & About To SMOKE MASSES cus im "In Focus" Like i put on GHOSTS GLASSES!

^^^ Those bars were nice as fuck .

I wanna see longer pieces though.
Flow here was smooth and ya punches were very creative.
Props.
Aka Raiza Sharp, R.A.I
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