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A Sick Man's Mind

Post by Dead Silence »

yoooo
its my comeback
now i rarely drop but usually when i do its pretty good
this is another deep dark alter ego on me
its how my obsession of one of my exes gets her killed
then i realize how much she has helped me but also at the same time
saying how much i really hate her
i don't know its a weird concept in my mind
if someone can explain what they think it would be great

ps
none this is true its a story and my "alto-ego" is the main character

yo hip-hop's crazy
killing cops amazes me
i skip scotch thru the lawn
ran over a fawn
oh no now what am i to do
so i chopped its head off and gave it to u
dont scream i swear to fuck i aint crazy
its just that some bitches dont faze me
but your different i loved you
and now your out the door
what more is there to hang on for?
i screamin at you
stop lieing to me
and tell me whats true
you said u were out having some tea
oh my god whats wrong wit me
i killed her wit a screwdriver
just so i can wait on my new arrival
to come back to where it all started
where everyone wears the same suits
the color of puke... and so much dispare
theres nothing to bare
nothing more to hang on to
i close my eyes and all i see is you
i wish i could be you
if only i could see you
i wouldn't have ur blood on my hands
bloods gushing like the flood brand
you know. how fast that shit comes in
wipes out everything in its sight
and it has u feeling so tight
locked up in a cage
getting spit on
i cant wait till this shits gone
so you wont be on my sick mind
making my soul feeling like its a trick find
fuck why couldn't we stay together
theres no more weather
every things Grey... no sight or sound
bodies astray...gotta fight it down
so now im on my own to feet
your off my mind now u cant cheat
and get a billion points on THIS game
now im worth trillions with a different name
im happy for what you did
coz otherwise id still be The Kid
but you carried me on
there wasn't a minute u were gone
then you don't think im going anywhere
that im gonna be stuck in this penny wear
well now im out of my cage
look in my eyes and see nothing by rage
you see my inner demons come out
its a good thing my semen didn't go south
then there would be another TK6
age 12 when i loaded my clipz
but now your gone in heave
rest in peace December 11, 2007
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Post by MesaR »

ok to be honest this sort of bored me, we all get abit sick of hearing how we wont to kill people and shit, it was all simple rhyming vocab was poor story line could have been better, and what your saying about what u write is good, Wrong. the content might be but lyrically there basic as fuck iv'e seen enough drops to back this up, keep dropping though, work on ur structure because 10 words for a bar just doesnt cut it.. i'll be looking out for your next drop. ;)
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