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ORLANDO:

Your Punches Fail! All Of It Crashes Smash Ya Disses! Turn Your Pun Into Ashes
As For Ghost He's The Joke Of The Sight/Site Without Making Fun Of His Glasses
Your Verse's Ain't Sick But They Similar To Throw Up! Kid You Need To Grow Up
Droppin Album? Nah Yu Suck, Hitting The Denator, Only Way You'll See C4 Blow Up
D.S? He Will Die By The Pen, Deadly Beyond Mesaure! Bitch Yu Know My Violence-Ah-Ten
So When Wild Bill Spits A Verse, Is The Only Time You'll Be Seein Dead Silence Agian
Honestly Me And Hazard Are Creatin Danger, Have Yu Runnin! I Got RAZIA OUT And Evading Anger
Stangle Yu W/ Audio Equipment, Till He's Screamin On Da Mic Like His Joints In The Creation Chamber
Watch As I Aim The Tek, I'll Gain A Check After I Murder Each Of These Lamesless Wrecks
And One Fuckin Punch'll Have Domino Stumble & Fall Agian And Agian Like The Chain Effect


Haz:

Doods "Standin Cold" im RUSSIAN THEN Popping Extacy When dis Fag Ekoms TOUCHIN MEN
Seq wans um 2 Stoop To Child Molesta Koms the Clown he like Seq u takin my "Style ya Jesta"

Bill Tried to get on some Slick-Shit So a "Few Roses around um" Da only Thing dis PRICK GIT!
he Ata car wash Cleanin "Shoes" like a Kick Kit he Needa put his body pic Away & "KICK iT"

Plex a Bitch like his Name ERICA dis Virus show um "Misery" & Keep his "Dell a ware" cus he is AMERICA!
His empires done watch da Throne-Ignite i'll show Homes a Fight (copy rights) how he OWNS THE SITE!

No ones Signin-a-Ho who always is Whinin To Pro's cus his shit Forced he ain Neva REDEFININ THE FLOW!
Nightmare.. Someone Needah Wake-Ya-Ass & " Bring ya To The grave" like dis Unda Takah-Class

Phantom needa stop Cryin & Shit durin Daydreams Diein Wid Mits cus hotness he "Diein 2 Git"
Dis Niggah a Cotton Mouth M-C why he Tryin-To-Spit? u Bein Nice is like a Miyin Wit WIT!
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Post by WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT »

Word? It Ain't Beef Either So Don't Get It Twisted
WILD BILL IS THE GAYEST BITCH ON HERE...NIGGA IS SOFT AS FUCK, I TOLD HIM YOU KNOW IT...IT'S OBVIOUS, HE'S NOT REAL...HIAWASE RD.

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Post by Haz »

lol
Wud Happened?
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Post by WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT »

LMAO POSTED IN HERE INSTEAD OF THE SHOUTBOX!!!! ANYWAYS FEED?
WILD BILL IS THE GAYEST BITCH ON HERE...NIGGA IS SOFT AS FUCK, I TOLD HIM YOU KNOW IT...IT'S OBVIOUS, HE'S NOT REAL...HIAWASE RD.

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Post by Meta-the-DEMON »

Was checkin' for my name.... Haha.... No but seriously:


It was a cool drop... Nothing too heavy. I could tell yall were just having some fun. A few basic multies and predictable punches but it was an entertaining read all-in-all.
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Post by Arvincible »

Lmao a collabo dissing illest? Looks familiar haha but anyways even I admit this turned out better than my collab wit raiza. You guys had pretty decent lines here and there, orlando's line about ghost was pretty creative and hazard's "dell a ware" line was dope as fuck. I liked those the most. Good shit guys, collabs like these are always entertaining to read cuz u never know who u gonna BANG ON next lol. Keep it up.
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

i personally didnt think this held up to the name you gave it, the diss on me was aight nothin special but i thought it could ov been better (the diss against me) but nice shots were takin else where, thought orlandos diss on bill and dead silence and raiza were the best of the collab, then hazards line about plex was pretty nice too.. id give it a 7/10
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Post by WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT »

Word man thanks for the feedback..................
WILD BILL IS THE GAYEST BITCH ON HERE...NIGGA IS SOFT AS FUCK, I TOLD HIM YOU KNOW IT...IT'S OBVIOUS, HE'S NOT REAL...HIAWASE RD.

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Post by thaphantom »

So haz that's all you diss on? You guys should of made it a lil longer...it was iight..
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

not bad,i wuz hopin haz wud come harder but its all good it wuz still good,i dont have ne quoteables but the pieces combined were tight,keep it up
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Post by WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT »

Props for the feed? Anyone else
WILD BILL IS THE GAYEST BITCH ON HERE...NIGGA IS SOFT AS FUCK, I TOLD HIM YOU KNOW IT...IT'S OBVIOUS, HE'S NOT REAL...HIAWASE RD.

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Post by Omega Bill »

Orlandos best:
Your Punches Fail! All Of It Crashes Smash Ya Disses! Turn Your Pun Into Ashes
As For Ghost He's The Joke Of The Sight/Site Without Making Fun Of His Glasses

Good punch. Got a sneaky little jab in there, it worked, good stuff.

D.S? He Will Die By The Pen, Deadly Beyond Mesaure! Bitch Yu Know My Violence-Ah-Ten
So When Wild Bill Spits A Verse, Is The Only Time You'll Be Seein Dead Silence Agian

Fuck outta here, lmao.

Honestly Me And Hazard Are Creatin Danger, Have Yu Runnin! I Got RAZIA OUT And Evading Anger
Stangle Yu W/ Audio Equipment, Till He's Screamin On Da Mic Like His Joints In The Creation Chamber

Nice punch homie.


Haz's best:

Doods "Standin Cold" im RUSSIAN THEN Popping Extacy When dis Fag Ekoms TOUCHIN MEN
Seq wans um 2 Stoop To Child Molesta Koms the Clown he like Seq u takin my "Style ya Jesta"

Nice job incorporating 2 people in 1 bar, made it work, flowed well.

Bill Tried to get on some Slick-Shit So a "Few Roses around um" Da only Thing dis PRICK GIT!
he Ata car wash Cleanin "Shoes" like a Kick Kit he Needa put his body pic Away & "KICK iT"

Best thing about my pics is yall cant even say anything bad about it. Suck it. lol.

No ones Signin-a-Ho who always is Whinin To Pro's cus his shit Forced he ain Neva REDEFININ THE FLOW!
Nightmare.. Someone Needah Wake-Ya-Ass & " Bring ya To The grave" like dis Unda Takah-Class

LMAO. I liked that bar. Good punch, nice fuckin jab right there.

Orlando - Brought some good shit to the table, good flow, some lines didnt hit as hard as they coulda, but theyll get better.

Haz - Wordplay is sick as always and it's only getting better.
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Post by WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT »

Props for the feedback...And the breakdown

+respect
WILD BILL IS THE GAYEST BITCH ON HERE...NIGGA IS SOFT AS FUCK, I TOLD HIM YOU KNOW IT...IT'S OBVIOUS, HE'S NOT REAL...HIAWASE RD.

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Post by WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT »

Who Else?
WILD BILL IS THE GAYEST BITCH ON HERE...NIGGA IS SOFT AS FUCK, I TOLD HIM YOU KNOW IT...IT'S OBVIOUS, HE'S NOT REAL...HIAWASE RD.

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Post by WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT »

LOL...Fo Sho, Props For The Feedback
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