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Haz
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"Diss-Respect"

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Alot of Subliminals Huh!



Hes about to "Take a Break" Like a Ornament cus he got Beat in his own TOURNAMENT!
u On me Like a (Few Molez) but a Bitch Pulld a DMX Rippin Ya ass a NEW HOLE!

Wine drew got ya Min Screwd im da 1 u Wine 2 wen Arv pulla 10 year sentence
& Out SHYNEZ U!..Dis a Truth-Diss "No Babe" Truely When ya Ass "RUTH-LISS!"

Sayin i Gotta Rag ima Rag on U ya Clique ina Mouse Dawg u Guna "Drag on who"
u Kno how Drag-Onz-Do its SHABBY DUN Spit fire at who Tryna STAB ME SON!

Consider a Verse Dis-Respect when it Diss-Respect i Guess i Missd a Spec
i Feel like pullin tha "DUSTA OUT" u'll Hear "Dont TOUCH IT" Outa BUSTA MOUTH!!

Son Disrespectin POPPA STILL?! i'll Make um Down rat poison as he POP A PILL
Dont "Get Big" on "Ster Joy" i Just Grilld U Fat Niggah No Need To STARE BOY
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Post by Arvincible »

lol idk if that line was a compliment or a diss haha

ur drop against h2flow was viscious and it was a lot of punches
but this is all about touching up on ur style and hittin hard with the wordplay

Consider a Verse Dis-Respect when it Diss-Respect i Guess i Missd a Spec
i Feel like pullin tha "DUSTA OUT" u'll Hear "Dont TOUCH IT" Outa BUSTA MOUTH!!

^^^fave line here

Im starting to understand your techniques more dude
real good stuff. for a short piece i'll give this an 8.5/10

WHat happened to our COllabo mang?
ITll be real sick. Hit me up whenever. Ive been busy wit school
and shit lately so i havent been as active, but im still down nigga.

peace
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Wheneva u On Aim We'll Get To the Collab
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~Symbolikull~
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

this shit was pretty ill man, nice word play an subliminals....lol
shit hit hard and quik it was nice overall

i agree wit arv on this one
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT »

Subliminals were str8. But didn't come off as hard as you could've made. It but was pretty straight man.
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