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This next individual chooses to call himself arvincible,
doest understand how I could n will flip his whole verse,
Hes no worse, than a stubborn child who wont learn,
before u attempt hit me u gotta try to see the ghost first,
This kids a bitch, jus another flake Hes feminine skilled,
Arv doesn't leave feed so yeah I was PM'in him still,
My keen adrenaline will leave em ill til he needs medicine pills,
If Im not the won kill him off his corny metaphors will,

Orlando.. Damn This kids thinks hes comin back like the 4th Rambo Cast,
My arsenal will force ammo down ya throat wit those Forced Battle Raps,
“bar 4 barâ€
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by Haz »

Arv doesn't leave feed so yeah I was PM'in him still,
My keen adrenaline will leave em ill til he needs medicine pills, <-- LoL Dat Wus a Solid Section
If Im not the won kill him off his corny metaphors will,


Orlando.. Damn This kids thinks hes comin back like the 4th Rambo Cast,
My arsenal will force ammo down ya throat wit those Forced Battle Raps,
“bar 4 barâ€
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Post by Omega Bill »

This next individual chooses to call himself arvincible,
doest understand how I could n will flip his whole verse,
Hes no worse, than a stubborn child who wont learn,
before u attempt hit me u gotta try to see the ghost first,
This kids a bitch, jus another flake Hes feminine skilled,
Arv doesn't leave feed so yeah I was PM'in him still,
My keen adrenaline will leave em ill til he needs medicine pills,
If Im not the won kill him off his corny metaphors will,

That whole piece flowed smoothly, punched the shit outta him, and was solid.

Orlando.. Damn This kids thinks hes comin back like the 4th Rambo Cast,

Like that like line a lot.

In the shoutbox, why you keep talkin like you eatin kids like what u suck out cocks!
Ur come backs were about penises & nut sacks, u don't like sports ur jus about jocks,

Nice good, good punch, set it up nice.

This e-beef im Tenderizin, in the beginning im energizing but in the end im Mesmorizin,
If yalls sick im Death to Rhymin, but im death defiant ur finished jus Accept the Timin,
Yall jus Salty Deliriously, to the point of the brink u think ur not Faulty Lyrically,
Admit it my Multies act Furiously, you didn't really think you could Assault me Seriously,
Jus wait and Ghost will Hit at U, fagget as ametures dissin on me Both U Didn't Prove,
Anything, jus showed ya Flow is Pitiful, talkin about Cee4 both yall Blow Identical,

Like the first part, whole thing flowed real nice, went sick with the multis and punches and just scorched.

Solid diss. 1 or 2 bars didn't seem to hit really hard, but the rest your bars hit enough to make up for it. Good shit homie. Maybe rooks will stop goin after big dogs, prolly not though, haha.
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Post by WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT »

Yo Couldn't You Have Waited For Your Dropped The Site Diss...I Mean Shit, We Just Did One....

But IMO.... Personals Were Solid, Thought The Wordplay Could've Been Stepped Up. Cause Cats Is A Lil Played Out...But Personals Were Cool, Flow Was Solid Throughout...Need Some Better Connecting Multis...But It Was Solid! Thought I Think I Called You A Dickhead Twice, Not A Million Times... The Finisher Was A Good Ender Tho....But You Focused Too Much At One Person Like You Did Like Half Of This Shit About Me And Arv. You Shoulda Came At Some More People Then Just A Few....But Shit Was Pretty Solid...Rambo Cast Was A Nice Concept, Came Off Straight As Well. I Think With Some Rewording It Could Be More Serious And Sicker...But Concept Wise, I Was Feelin It...Jus Missed A Lil Sumthen But Stil Str8.
WILD BILL IS THE GAYEST BITCH ON HERE...NIGGA IS SOFT AS FUCK, I TOLD HIM YOU KNOW IT...IT'S OBVIOUS, HE'S NOT REAL...HIAWASE RD.

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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

you two are the only ones that dissed me... so you got it and no one else

but gracias for the feed
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by WILDBILLISAGUIDOFAGGIT »

Lol Me And Haz Dissed U...Not Arv
WILD BILL IS THE GAYEST BITCH ON HERE...NIGGA IS SOFT AS FUCK, I TOLD HIM YOU KNOW IT...IT'S OBVIOUS, HE'S NOT REAL...HIAWASE RD.

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Post by Brah-Vo »

This shit was dope.
Neva thought u was the type to drope a diss, But hey u pulled it off.
It takes one thing to be a versatile MC
is takes another to be versatile AND dope at everything.

Personals/punches were hot
Wordplay was abit iffy but thas iight.
Flow was iight coulda been better.

Shit was Nice my dude.
Aka Raiza Sharp, R.A.I
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Post by Arvincible »

lol u dissed me too, it was ok, idk if the diss connect but ehhh watever.
I liked the third part the best. Good diss on the other guys lmao

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Post by Glamtrash »

This shit was good. Even out of your element you still shine.

Overall I give it a 8.7/10

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Post by Viral »

haaa....i liked that...it was a good amount on bars per person...i like how u put that together...keep droppin
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