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Arvincible · Post by **Arvincible** » Mon Mar 10, 2008 5:28 am

lmao at the rolle-royce line great punch/nameplay

he had it comin didnt he lol

Glamtrash · Post by **Glamtrash** » Tue Mar 11, 2008 2:54 pm

Lmaooo...Not your best shit, but that's not what you were goin for. Funny as fuck though.

Vaseline is Tha Only Time You Got Hopes Of Beatin Anyone
Gettin Sick Of You Frontin i'll Teach You How Tha Semi Run
^^
Fav bit.

Gutta · Post by **Gutta** » Wed Mar 12, 2008 2:32 pm

haha who was u dissin in dis piece?

anyways yuh i lyked the vaseline and the rolls royce lynes in dis those are the two that i think made the piece and were the strongest bars of yuh piece.

anyways shit was a good, short Lil read man but i enjoyed it so keep droppin bruh

thanks for the feed on mine its much appreciated

Omega Bill · Post by **Omega Bill** » Wed Mar 12, 2008 2:37 pm

lol. Oh you silly bitch. Phantom isn't even worht responding to anymore.

Good piece, flowed well, nice punches and it was nice for a short little read, knocked dudes mouth out with this, haha. I would say I wish it coulda been longer but there's only so many of use that can rag on Phantom at one time, lol.

Viral · Post by **Viral** » Wed Mar 12, 2008 3:58 pm

lol shit was funny...pretty decent multis..nothin too extreme..ive def seen better from ya....u shoulda made it longer!..haaha..itll be funny to see phantom bitch some more..haha good piece man...keep droppin

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Wed Mar 12, 2008 5:19 pm

yeah it had a humerous side to it, not ur best shit but u prolly wrote it quik, i liked the opener shit was great.

still better than anything he would spit

Cee4 · Post by **Cee4** » Thu Mar 13, 2008 7:36 am

Kid i'm Sorry Ta Say it But Ya Whole Anthem is Wack
Tha Rolls-Royce Tha Only Time Tha Phantom is Crack
This flowed well. Dope punch. Probably the best bar from the whole piece
Kid Shut Tha Fuck Up i'm Sick Of Seein Ya Cryin
When Ya Get Good Feed They Either Showin Sympathy Or Lyin
This flowed well. I wasn't really feeling the punch tho
You Lame Dawg i'm Sick Of You Duckin And Hidin
You're A Faggot Always On Dick Fuckin And Ridin
didn't like this bar. It seemed really basic. Punch had no creativity
Vaseline is Tha Only Time You Got Hopes Of Beatin Anyone
Gettin Sick Of You Frontin i'll Teach You How Tha Semi Run
First line was good. It had a nice punch. Second line was alright, nothing special
Back To Stickin Jabs And Upper Cuts i'll Hit With Tha Left And Right
This Was Already Planned Kid You've Been Tha Next in Sight
Again it was pretty average. Flowed well and decent multis

Overall this had a couple of dope punches.(the Rolls Royce one was the best). The flow and multis were on point the whole way through. I don't think they fell off once. The rest of the verse I wasn't really feeling. For a diss it didn't really hit hard. It seemed a bit rushed.

Prophet · Post by **Prophet** » Fri Mar 14, 2008 2:31 pm

The flow and multies were good, punches were ok, 1st bar was the best in tha whole piece IMO. Seemed rushed but this piece was coo.

Arvincible · Post by **Arvincible** » Sat Mar 15, 2008 7:14 pm

"Thanks For Tha Feed it's Preciated.."

lmao great way to up ur posts, imma start doin that haha
jk loser

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