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Response to Cee4.

Post by Omega Bill »

It isn't beef or anything well though-out, just a response to your drop, haha. No hate, you know that, we're cool.

Cee4 is gonna see whats in store, when hes rhyming its like twats galore
But stop the lore, your rhymes just impress then bore, whatre you restin for
You dont battle no more? Thats good decision, because your flow is missin
Just keep on dissin while you're sittin back cause Im the MJ you're jus Pippen
Leave the scrips limpin, cause Ill crack your mensicus, while you're readin this
Because all you can feed is shit, cause you cant write cause your punches dont hit
I guess you're the Punchless Princess, retarded, cause your mother had senseless incest
Hence this impress-ive streak, I can give you some tips, cause past month Ive run the Scrips
But you run your lips, too much, get off Doms dick like you sayin "Lets do lunch"
Well I gotta hunch, that Cee4, is gonna see cores, when I split him down the stomach
Cant rap lyrics so he hums it, and apparently he isnt acquainted with Bill because I run this
You still have some hits, but your personals lack, only time you blow up is lyin on your back

Suck it, haha.
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Post by Omega Bill »

Thanks for the detailed breakdown. Much appreciated.

Thanks for the feed.
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

great opener, middle was "solid", and u had a good finisher.... i already read half of this so...i pretty much agree wit JJ here on most everything
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Thanks for the feed. It's appreciated.
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