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Post by Viral »

new track i wrote yesterday n put together for today....nothin big its a 1:30 of me bein stupid i suppose...wanted to release somethin different...lol i believe i pulled it off pretty well...it starts right away...anyways give it a listen....feed would be much appreciated


Written/recorded by: Viral
beat produced by: Khil
beat supplied by: KO (he demanded da props!)..lol
Mixed n Mastered by: Viral
Last edited by Viral on Thu Apr 03, 2008 9:40 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

lol sounds like u hadda krazy trip on acid n coke n shit n wrote about it lmao..good change up in topics tho,flow wuz good,i think u cudda brought a lil more emotion in ur delivery otherwise it was pretty cool man

p.s.: leave some feed on the 're made' version i posted
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

shit was dope man.... all i can say nice verse homie
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Post by Viral »

thanks for the feed so far yall much appreciated...also be on the look out for a track wit KO featurin me...itll be up sometime soon


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Post by complexity »

"if your name was lines" are so corny

I loved the way, you used call back rhymes and were fucking with the rhyme schemes.

Obviously, it wasn't written perfectly, but i still felt the written content.

As for the delivery, it seemed a little unbalanced, but I still liked it.

The mixing? Let's not even go there.
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

i like the consistency of the flow, wouldn't say its ur best tho, but it's up there somewhere in the top 5, good shyt, i was lookin for sound effects but i see u took them vocally which is str8
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Post by Glamtrash »

This was good. But it didn't "touch me" at all. The Valentines day one kicked this ones ass. Your flow was good, and the beat was okay. I give this a 7.3/10.
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Post by Viral »

Double.FL wrote:This was good. But it didn't "touch me" at all. The Valentines day one kicked this ones ass. Your flow was good, and the beat was okay. I give this a 7.3/10.

lol thanks for da feed...i can see why u think that...i wrote this n recorded it in one day....n spent about 45 minutes mixin it...lol if that...i kinda just wanted to get somethin out n try somethin different then i normally do...it was rushed...lol extremely...haha

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Post by 16 Micz »

idk, its not your best in my opinion but the lyrics were cool, flow was ehhh, ok, decent track, nothing special in my opinion.
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thanks for da feed...


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Post by Arvincible »

great beats and very creative lyrics

it was intense down the middle and everything else was good too
you're shit is getting better viral, this is the best ive heard from you,
you sound totally different here compared to the Omega track...

this is the better one. good stuff 8/10 cuhhz
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