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when i'm rappin i spray da fact
if i'm not attackin i will remain strapped
you wont know wots happenin when i cock both gats
ya bones be snappin to a baseball bat
raise both macs with a spas 12 to see how you react
cant run ya got no knee caps a relaps perhaps in ya memory relax
says da doctor after you sit back
ya on 3 different pills and now ya an alchi
sit back and chill says doc trust me dont doubt me
died from a heart attck actin all rowdy
they daint use a coffin they decided to drown im
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Post by Haz »

The Baseball Bat line Didnt Make No sense

Other Den Dat i Liked The Flow.
you Should Try Using Multis u Wus gettin Sumwhere

cant run ya got no knee caps a relaps

"knee caps" " relaps"..

The Flow Wus Strait though

Liked the "Spray Fact" Followed Up by "Remain Strapd"
U Put a Lil Thought into Dis

Yo P-m Me If you Need Help Man i'll Be Glad Ta Help ..
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thanks for the feed back
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