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My laptop is down folks, and so I can really do much of what I do daily, which is to read articles and all that on the web,so I just made a verse on my phone, so enjoy...


Yes, my flows faster than those G4 jets, u couldn't be more stressed,
Wouldn't help to flee nor fret, I reach a bar higher than what Cee4 sets,
And me bein lower? Imma make cee forget, cuz now I can beat your best,
Ill pass yo ass in this classic clash like the way u try to cheat your tests!
And actually my hospitality takes u straight to a hospital ya see,
that's just about the cost to battle me, your fate is fatality!
I blast the scene, play with fire, dip the matches in some gasoline,
you bastards act hard in ya backyards but only those masks are mean,
slice them off and these guys are soft like takin the cover off an orange,
you couldn't handle arv's grasps to rap so ill just knock ya off like a door hinge...
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Uppin for feed..
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Off the top


You think u can beat my best slanty eyes, piss off im colder
Mr potato head, my knife will slice that chip off ya shoulder
Askin rap forums for sex ed, coz you got a dyke for a sister
If her hymens broken, whats it gonna look like when I fist her
Postin weak disses on ya phone, dude get a life that's just lame
It`s a shame, that an MOP cds the only way you`ll touch Fame
Everythin about you is corny, is this ur thread? Then I will rob
Knock me like door hinges? Nah you`d rather twist Bills knob
Im better in every department, im his God and vince is damned
4 months n im bored with you, ur played out like Vince McMahon
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i think it's a good rap nice man
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I gotta spit back


You think its lame that i write quick when im spittin on my sidekick?
Least I never take my bestfriend from topix, lay him down and ride dick
You talk about chips? Ill take geeks like u to school n beat u for lunches
I eat you don't, and I was first to laugh when I saw haz beat u in punches
Punchline king? Dom stepped in and you said "i don't mean to disrespect"
Called it a friendly competion that's how the nigga keeps you in check
Saw me comin up n try to keep me down, this aint BK,cuhz, u can't have ur way
Low life, ur on the shoutbox boastin around, about gettin a buzz on a saturday
Went from infamous to cee4, but now we know only ur fame blows
The only department you good at is the blow job corner, fuckin a rainbow
You tryin to prove you the best in text, but ur own girlfriend is stressed from sex
she wants a real man to mess with next, cuz playin marvel toys is the only time u mess with 'X',
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Post by B-Bear »

Keep on going fellas.. this is kinda funny!!

Since I gave u feed on your topic Cee, i'ma let Arv know what i think about him now.. *bells of doom* lol, anywaay - i'm impressed by your flow, write a lil bit like i've been doin lately, short worded-multies if u can say it like that.. lol.. don't know the name of it.. u had some tiiight punches!! gotta say i was impressed, cause it's the first bars i've ever read from u, keep doin what ur doin.. and cee, get ya ass outta that couch u slob and answer him!! lol
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i dunno i might hit u back A.R but i cant be fucked goin back and forth for no feed or win on my record
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i know fool i want feed on my writing not a fucking verse.
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And thanks Bear i read ur shit from a while back where you been?
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Doin everything else but writing music.. i've been doin some local shows, keepin my ass busy at school.. graduating from high school (or upper secondary school if that makes more sense to y'all) this spring, so it's a looot of shit that needs to be done, plus i got my parents bitchin about doin a good job when i'm so FUCKIN tired of it.. that's kept me busy for a really long time, and i needed new inspiration - develop new aspects in my writing, find my style.. goin to studio after the summer, plannin on releasing a demo/mixtape around next christmas, so that's what i've been doin really.. lol.. made sense?
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yeah thats real cool
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