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The Way My Mama Raised Me

Post by Kurse »

Here's a lil sumthin that's been sittin in the archives for a couple of weeks. We recorded it a few weeks back but just let it sit around for a while until someone got to mixing it finally. haha

Anyways...here's "The Way My Mama Raised Me"

Featured on the song (in play order)

HKX
KO
Kurse
Viral

Hook done by KO

"The Way My Mama Raised Me"
Written By: R. Garcia, K. Owens, R. Bueno & A. Brunello
Recorded @ Ape Lab 27 in Warrenville, IL
Anger Manij'ment Entertainment Inc.
All Rights Reserved.2008
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Last edited by Kurse on Fri Apr 25, 2008 5:45 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by HKX »

Viral u got off at da mixin' I think u perfected da craft of mixin nigga shit sounds nice and clean big ups dawg
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Post by B-Bear »

I liked the track, mixing was good - viral really stepped his game up since the last time i heard him mixing a track.. here's my opinion bout the track


HKX - confident flow, prolly the best.. lyrics not too impressive
KO - bad delivery, sick lyrics
Kurse - bit disappointing lyrics, delivery and flow was good
Viral - flow and delivery reminded me of some early eminem shit.. lol

Hook - kinda liked it.. could've added a female vocal or sth to make it more emotional
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Post by Kurse »

Good lookin on on the feed guys...def appreciate your thoughts and opinions.

Uppin for more.
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Post by Cee4 »

i liked this. beat was dope

HKX - flow was nice, probably the best of the 4, lyrics could of been better but a decent verse

KO - Had the best verse of the 4 but could improve on delivery. like the hook. at first i wasnt sure about it but it got kinda catchy and it fitted the beat perfectly

Kurse - Dope flow as always. Lyrics were nothin too special but again a solid verse

Viral - kinda hit and miss for me. mostly hit tho. too me your voice/delivery is generally dope but sometimes its borderline annoying. also sometimes i dont know what your talkin about. you got a kinda crazy style which is original but takes a bit of getting used to. still decent verse


overall i like this. one of my favourite AME tracks.
everyone came good in their own way
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Post by Kurse »

Good lookin on the detailed feed Cee
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

i liked this track, and the hook needed a better delivery but thats it..

hkx- dopest flow, needs to get a lil bit more lyrical, show your skills home boi
ko- dopest lyrics, flow was like " oh man i have to spit this verse, fuck it" wasnt feelin it
kurse- dopest delivery, lyrics were choppy for me, but your mic present is always there
viral- prolly the best verse overall, flow and delivery were great, lyrics were off and on usually more on

and that track cuts off right before the last hook comes in

nice shit guys
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man sick shit

KO was the best on my account
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keep this shit goin man
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Post by -MiiLz. »

First Dude Came The Nicest On The Flow, K.O. Had Some Tight Multies, Kurse Came Nice On The Flow & On The Lyrics. But i Felt On Viral Could Of Recorded Better Sounded As if He Was Just Tryna Get Done On The Track, But All Together its Good. i Wasnt Feeling The Hook That Much But, id Rate it Like 6/10. All Could Of Came Harder, But Nice Track.
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Post by K.O. »

evvvvvrrbody on illest. word. mad love to yall for peepin out the track and givin feed. pos/neg. whatever it may be just know that it is appreciated. X, Kurse, Spiral... i know i been mia for a minute but thats gonna change ill holla at yall tom.
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Post by MesaR »

this track was clean, the classic type of a ame track you would expect all rappers were on point nice msg around, and kurse u look fucking gay in your avatar.
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..Fuck that gay shit you say on a beat..
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Post by Kurse »

Atleast my avi is a pic of me you bass-terd!!! haha

Thanks for the feed homies.

And yea KO...make sure ur monkey-ass is in the lab wit the rest of the squad this Sunday, but be sure to call Viral and tell him not to stagulate over in Lombizzle
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Post by complexity »

HKX, the similes really need to be elevated. Even if you're not attempting to do Canibus like lyrics.

"sick as stds", lol

It was alright.

K.O

The verse was written nicely but the delivery was boring

I liked what you did on the beat though it seemed like you were just talking a few times.

Kurse

Killed the flow.

I didn't like the verse.

Viral

Decent man.

I wasn't feeling the hook or the topic at all.

The song overall was good but not outstanding.

I want to see something with a little more effort and meaning. Especially when you're putting everybody on the track.
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Post by Viral »

dammmn....talk about mad feed!...much appreciated it...i can see where some said it could be better on my part and sounded like i was jst tryin to get it done...but really....i had jst woken up...wrote da verse...n then recorded it right after...so i was still in a state of not fully awakedness...lol if dats even a word...hahahaha

but otherwise this has gotta the best feed received in awhile....thanks to all of you who enjoyed it....theres other tracks in the mixing process and wat not that will be out soon...sooooo keep on da look out
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Post by Momeijah »

Good Shit, Sounds Real Professional, The Hook Was Dope Too. i Can Definitely See Kurse influence in HKX When it Comes To Delivery, Good Verse. KO Had Some Nice Multis, His Delivery Was a Bit Sketchy at Some Parts But The Flow Was Dope, Strange i Know Lol. Kurse's Mic Presence is Sick as Usual, Verse Wasn't The Best ive Heard From Him But it Wasn't Exactly a Disappointment. When Viral Started i Was Like Woah This Flow is All Off But i Saw What He Was Doing Lol, Good Multis And Flow as Usual, Overall a Solid Track.
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